Opened 11 years ago

#18 new defect

Awkward description

Reported by: worley@… Owned by:
Priority: minor Milestone:
Component: rfc4244bis Version:
Severity: In WG Last Call Keywords:
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Description

This para in section 3 is awkward:

This specification defines parameters detailed in Section 6.1 for
carrying the following information in the History-Info header:

and some of the following items. E.g., some of the items are not "parameters", some are described using words that are not their parameter names, etc.

Better would be something like "The following information is carried
in the History-Info header, as detailed in section 6.1:".

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