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#36 duplicate Clarify wording worley@…
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Section 6.3.1 para 1 starts:

This specification defines a new SIP/SIPS URI Parameter indicating the mechanism by which a new target for a request is determined.

However the actual name of the parameter is not given until para 5. I suggest putting the name of the parameter into the first sentence of para 1.

#33 duplicate Confusing text in section 6.1 worley@…
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I see the sentence "The following summarizes the syntax..." -- this suggests that the actual syntax definition/specification is elsewhere. Do you mean "The following is the syntax..."?

#39 duplicate Correct use of "define" worley@…
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Section 6.3.1 para 5 is:

The following defines the ABNF for the "hit" URI parameter:

Please change this to:

The ABNF for the "hit" URI parameter is:

(The object of "define" is always a word or term that is defined; it is not the ABNF is defined. Indeed, the ABNF *defines* the syntax of the "hit" URI parameter.)

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