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#17 duplicate Unclear phrasing worley@…
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In section 3 is the odd phrase "any valid response" -- are there invalid responses? What is validity of responses? Better would be "any response", or probably more informatively, "any provisional or final response".

#22 duplicate Punctuation inside of quoted text is potentially confusing. worley@…
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This:

A UAC that does not want an hi-entry added due to privacy considerations MUST include a Privacy header with a priv-value(s) of "header" or "history." A UAC that wants to ensure that privacy not be applied to its identity MUST include a Privacy header with a priv- value of "none."

should have the punctuation moved for clarity:

A UAC that does not want an hi-entry added due to privacy considerations MUST include a Privacy header with a priv-value(s) of "header" or "history". A UAC that wants to ensure that privacy not be applied to its identity MUST include a Privacy header with a priv- value of "none".

#26 duplicate Wording nit worley@…
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In section 5.2 is "SHOULD forward captured History-Info in subsequent, provisional, and final responses to the request". I think that "subsequent" adds no meaning and should be removed.

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