Opened 5 years ago

Last modified 5 years ago

#2 new defect

use-cases-07 - 2.1.3/2.1.4 - grammar nit

Reported by: llorenzin@… Owned by: david.waltermire@…
Priority: minor Milestone:
Component: use-cases Version:
Severity: Waiting for Shepherd Writeup Keywords:
Cc:

Description

Comment from AD review -

Section 2.1.3 & 2.1.4:

Nit: Shouldn't #3 just be:
"Scheduled or ad hoc collection task."

Change History (2)

comment:1 Changed 5 years ago by llorenzin@…

  • Summary changed from Grammar nit to use-cases-07 - 2.1.3/2.1.4 - grammar nit

comment:2 Changed 5 years ago by david.waltermire@…

This seems like a reasonable change.

I'll include the following text in the next revision for the WG to review prior to restarting the IESG process:

Section 2.1.3:

  1. A scheduled or ad hoc collection task.

Section 2.1.4:

  1. A scheduled or ad hoc evaluation task.
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