Opened 8 years ago
Closed 8 years ago
#66 closed defect (fixed)
server-selection comments from Hassnaa Moustafa
Reported by: | hassnaa.moustafa@… | Owned by: | draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection@… |
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Priority: | minor | Milestone: | milestone1 |
Component: | server-selection | Version: | 1.0 |
Severity: | Active WG Document | Keywords: | |
Cc: |
Description
There are few editorial comments on draft (draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-02) as follows:
- The term IP address family used in the draft needs more text clarification (to say for example IPv4 or IPv6 or maybe other points that the authors have in mind).
- The IP addresses used in the diagram (in the example of Section 5) is not very consistent with the IP addresses mentioned in the text that explains the diagram.
Change History (1)
comment:1 Changed 8 years ago by dthaler@…
- Resolution set to fixed
- Severity changed from In WG Last Call to Active WG Document
- Status changed from new to closed
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