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#41 closed (fixed)

Editorial Changes for PS draft from Pete McCann

Reported by: kempf@… Owned by: kempf@…
Priority: minor Milestone:
Component: nohost-ps Severity:
Keywords: PS draft Cc: netlmm@…

Description

In the definition of an Access network:

Access Network (revised)

An Access Network consists of following three components: wireless or other access points, access routers, access network gateways which form the boundary to other networks and may shield other networks from the specialized routing protocols (if any) run in the Access Network; and (optionally) other internal access network routers which may also be needed in some cases to achieve a specialized routing protocol.

Should be:

Access Network (revised)

An Access Network consists of following four components: wireless or other access points, access routers, access network gateways, and (optionally) other internal access network routers. The access network gateways form the boundary to other networks and may shield other networks from the specialized routing protocols (if any) run in the Access Network. The internal access network routers may also be needed in some cases to achieve a specialized routing protocol.

Section 2.0, figure: It is confusing to have the different elements share the same name, e.g., there is AR A1 as well as AP A1. The text does not always include the type when naming a node. Suggest coming up with different names for each type, perhaps "AP-A" and "AR-1" etc.

Section 3.2: expand UWB (is this Ultra Wide Band)? And provide a reference for it and a reference for Bluetooth.

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