Opened 13 years ago

Closed 13 years ago

Last modified 12 years ago

#40 closed defect (fixed)

Editorial Changes for PS draft from Dirk Von-Hugo

Reported by: kempf@… Owned by: kempf@…
Priority: minor Milestone:
Component: nohost-ps Severity:
Keywords: PS draft Cc: netlmm@…

Description

Perhaps in chapter 2.0 after the figure one could emphasise that the NETLMM protocol only considers the AggR - AR part and an example for handling the MN-AR interface is given in http://www3.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-netlmm-mn-ar-if-00.txt.

The sentence above the listing of 3 problems should read either ... in using global mobility protocols ... or ... in using a global mobility protocol ...

Change History (3)

comment:1 Changed 13 years ago by kempf@…

  • Status changed from new to assigned

comment:2 Changed 13 years ago by kempf@…

  • Resolution set to fixed
  • Status changed from assigned to closed

Fixed second comment.

I'm not sure what the first comment is saying. I am unsure what the author's comment is meant to emphasize the connection is between the ANG (formerly AGGR) to AR link and the AR-MN link.

comment:3 Changed 12 years ago by anonymous

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