Opened 13 years ago

Closed 13 years ago

Last modified 12 years ago

#38 closed defect (fixed)

Editorial changes for the REQ draft from Jukka Manner

Reported by: kempf@… Owned by: kempf@…
Priority: minor Milestone:
Component: nohost-req Severity:
Keywords: REQ draft Cc:

Description

  • Sec 2.2 last paragraph is a bit obvious, is it not? Or is there a deeper thought?

Suggested resolution: This paragraph is intended to be a summary of the goal discussion in the previous paragraphs. Perhaps that is why it looks obvious.

  • Sec 2.4: "Some existing localized mobility management solutions increase packet size over the wireless link by adding tunneling or other per packet overhead." Do you have examples? A statement like this should have references and examples.

Suggested resolution: Remove the sentence. The rest of the paragraph provides enough context.

Change History (5)

comment:1 Changed 13 years ago by kempf@…

  • Status changed from new to assigned

comment:2 Changed 13 years ago by kempf@…

  • Cc netlmm@… removed
  • Component changed from draft-ietf-netlmm-nohost-ps to draft-ietf-netlmm-nohost-req

comment:3 Changed 13 years ago by kempf@…

  • Keywords REQ added; PS removed

comment:4 Changed 13 years ago by kempf@…

  • Resolution set to fixed
  • Status changed from assigned to closed

Fixed.

comment:5 Changed 12 years ago by anonymous

  • Milestone milestone2 deleted

Milestone milestone2 deleted

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