Opened 8 years ago

Closed 7 years ago

#110 closed defect (fixed)

Format/wording changes for Additional Considerations (3.4.3)

Reported by: duerst@… Owned by: draft-ietf-iri-3987bis@…
Priority: major Milestone:
Component: 3987bis Version:
Severity: - Keywords:
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Description

Because we have introduced helpful subsubsection headings, we now have a subsubsection that only contains two Notes. The Notes were used to indicate that these are additional considerations; this is now expressed by the subsubsection title.

The following patch does this and also changes a 'may' to 'can'.

--- C:/Users/duerst/AppData/Local/Temp/draft-ietf-iri-3987bis.xml-revBASE.svn000.tmp.xml	木 3  1 19:10:21 2012
+++ C:/Data/ietf-iri/draft-ietf-iri-3987bis/draft-ietf-iri-3987bis.xml	木 3  1 20:11:07 2012
@@ -694,8 +694,7 @@
 </section> <!-- punicode -->
   <section title="Additional Considerations">
 
-<t><list style="hanging"> 
-<t hangText="Note:">Domain Names may appear in parts of an IRI other
+<t>Domain Names can appear in parts of an IRI other
 than the ireg-name part.  It is the responsibility of scheme-specific
 implementations (if the Internationalized Domain Name is part of the
 scheme syntax) or of server-side implementations (if the
@@ -709,7 +708,7 @@
 The server-side implementation is responsible for making the
 necessary conversions to be able to retrieve the Web page.</t>
 
-<t hangText="Note:">In this process, characters allowed in URI
+<t>In this process, characters allowed in URI
 references and existing percent-encoded sequences are not encoded further.
 (This mapping is similar to, but different from, the encoding applied
 when arbitrary content is included in some part of a URI.)
@@ -720,8 +719,6 @@
 <vspace/>"http://www.example.org/red%09ros%C3%A9#red", not to
 something like
 <vspace/>"http%3A%2F%2Fwww.example.org%2Fred%2509ros%C3%A9%23red".</t>
-
-</list></t>
 </section> <!-- additional -->
 </section> <!-- dnsmapping -->

Change History (1)

comment:1 Changed 7 years ago by duerst@…

  • Resolution set to fixed
  • Status changed from new to closed

Implemented in revisions 157/158.

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