Volunteer participation and hour estimate

[john+rfc@…]

(B.10) Section 2.1.2.1.1

The text reads "The Series Editor role relies on volunteer

participation and needs to support the vitality and
effectiveness of volunteer participation."

First, relying on volunteer participation to make volunteer
participation effective just doesn't seem to make sense (and it
is a bad sentence in any event). More important, I think this
is not about just the Series Editor role but the whole RFC
Editor function.

(B.15) In 2.1.5, the document says "half of an FTE (approx 20
hours..." and then "over 20 hours..." during start-up. We
aren't talking about 21 hours as compared to 20 here,
especially if the RSE-appointee is not an active, experienced,
and senior member of the community. "well over 20 hours" in
the second case would help if you don't want to explain
further.

[jmh@…]

Revised in working draft