Marc's review part 1

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3.2. Transport Protocol Limitations
With the transition to IPv6 the number of NATs is likely to increase.
<MB>I think this statement needs to be better explained, since depending on how you interpret it, one can have a different opinion</MB>

Today, application protocol designers may, however, get the

impression that tunneling inside HTTP or even HTTPS is required to
get an application running in a large number of environments,
especially to reach a customer base that is connected to the Internet
through an enterprise network.

<MB>might be appropriate to reference the draft on "Internet over port 80" here.

3.3

" (due to the lack of his or her expertise. "
<MB>lacks the ) at the end</MB>

"Imagine a browser that sends location data encoded in

JSON [25], for example using [26], "

<MB>s/[26]/GeoJSON[26]/

9. Informative References

<MB>There are a lot of references with only title and date. While URL are not guaranteed, it seems to me that given the large amount of references without URL and the impact on the discussion and argumentation, it would be preferable to have URLs so people can refer to them. </MB>