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#525 closed editorial (wontfix)

Gen-ART Last Call review draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-25

Reported by: julian.reschke@… Owned by: draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional@…
Priority: normal Milestone: 26
Component: p4-conditional Severity: In IESG Evaluation
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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-25

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2013-11-18/2013-12-02

IETF LC End Date: End of November (special deadline)

IESG Telechat date: 2013-12-19

Summary:

This draft is almost ready to be published as Proposed Standard but I have some comments.


-[Page 4], Introduction, it would make the draft clearer if we give 1-2 every day examples of when conditions are used/useful.


-[Page 10], "filesystem"---->"file system" - see [2502]


-General comment: since mostly used with caching, why not considered merging with part 6? - http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/ietf-http-wg/2013OctDec/1663.html


- [Page 22], Security section, as mentioned in my other reviews, would it be better to have a separate draft to discuss all security issues related to HTTP? - http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/ietf-http-wg/2013OctDec/1663.html

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comment:8 Changed 7 years ago by mnot@…

Re: examples in introduction - there are already examples below.

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