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#521 closed editorial (wontfix)

Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-24

Reported by: julian.reschke@… Owned by: draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range@…
Priority: normal Milestone: 26
Component: p5-range Severity: In IESG Evaluation
Keywords: Cc:

Description

Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-24 Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty Review Date: November 18, 2013 IETF LC End Date: End of November IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: The draft is ready with nits to resolve. The run-on sentences need to be corrected to make the draft easier to read. I called out a few examples, however, there are many more in the draft. I reviewed this a couple of weeks ago, before -25 was released and am working my way through all of the documents.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

Please go through the draft in detail and break up run-on sentences into multiple sentences where possible.

Section 3.2: At end of second to last paragraph, remove parenthesis around full sentence.

Section 4.2: Please break first sentence into multiple. Section 4.3 - 4th paragraph really needs to be broken into multiple sentences.

Change History (4)

comment:1 Changed 6 years ago by julian.reschke@…

  • Milestone changed from unassigned to 26
  • Severity changed from In IETF LC to In IESG Evaluation

comment:2 Changed 6 years ago by mnot@…

  • Type changed from design to editorial

comment:3 Changed 6 years ago by julian.reschke@…

  • Resolution set to wontfix
  • Status changed from new to closed

Is is my opinion that the spec is ok the way it is.

comment:4 Changed 6 years ago by fielding@…

From [2560]:

(editorial) remove parentheses in 3.2 and make the point clearer; see #521

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