#521 closed editorial (wontfix)
Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-24
Reported by: | julian.reschke@… | Owned by: | draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range@… |
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Priority: | normal | Milestone: | 26 |
Component: | p5-range | Severity: | In IESG Evaluation |
Keywords: | Cc: |
Description
Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-24 Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty Review Date: November 18, 2013 IETF LC End Date: End of November IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary: The draft is ready with nits to resolve. The run-on sentences need to be corrected to make the draft easier to read. I called out a few examples, however, there are many more in the draft. I reviewed this a couple of weeks ago, before -25 was released and am working my way through all of the documents.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
Please go through the draft in detail and break up run-on sentences into multiple sentences where possible.
Section 3.2: At end of second to last paragraph, remove parenthesis around full sentence.
Section 4.2: Please break first sentence into multiple. Section 4.3 - 4th paragraph really needs to be broken into multiple sentences.
Change History (4)
comment:1 Changed 8 years ago by julian.reschke@…
- Milestone changed from unassigned to 26
- Severity changed from In IETF LC to In IESG Evaluation
comment:2 Changed 8 years ago by mnot@…
- Type changed from design to editorial
comment:3 Changed 8 years ago by julian.reschke@…
- Resolution set to wontfix
- Status changed from new to closed
Is is my opinion that the spec is ok the way it is.