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#513 closed editorial (incorporated)
APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-httpbis-p7-auth-24
| Reported by: | julian.reschke@… | Owned by: | draft-ietf-httpbis-p7-auth@… |
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| Priority: | normal | Milestone: | unassigned |
| Component: | p7-auth | Severity: | In IETF LC |
| Keywords: | Cc: |
Description (last modified by julian.reschke@…)
Minor Issues:
In Section 1:
"HTTP provides several OPTIONAL challenge-response authentication schemes that can be used by a server to challenge a client request and by a client to provide authentication information."
I suggest using RFC 2119 after Section 1.2. - see #515
Nits:
In Section 2.1:
"Additional mechanisms MAY be used, such as encryption at the transport level or via message encapsulation, and with additional header fields specifying authentication information."
Change History (5)
comment:1 Changed 6 years ago by julian.reschke@…
comment:2 Changed 6 years ago by julian.reschke@…
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comment:3 Changed 6 years ago by julian.reschke@…
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comment:4 Changed 6 years ago by julian.reschke@…
- Resolution set to incorporated
- Status changed from new to closed
- Type changed from design to editorial
all items either fixed or tracked separately
comment:5 Changed 6 years ago by julian.reschke@…
- Severity changed from In WG Last Call to In IETF LC
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From [2446]:
Replace unneeded "MAY" by "can" (see #513)