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#513 closed editorial (incorporated)

APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-httpbis-p7-auth-24

Reported by: julian.reschke@… Owned by: draft-ietf-httpbis-p7-auth@…
Priority: normal Milestone: unassigned
Component: p7-auth Severity: In IETF LC
Keywords: Cc:

Description (last modified by julian.reschke@…)

Minor Issues:

In Section 1:

"HTTP provides several OPTIONAL challenge-response authentication schemes that can be used by a server to challenge a client request and by a client to provide authentication information."

I suggest using RFC 2119 after Section 1.2. - see #515

Nits:

In Section 2.1:

"Additional mechanisms MAY be used, such as encryption at the transport level or via message encapsulation, and with additional header fields specifying authentication information."

The RFC 2119 "may" is unnecessary. - see [2446]

Change History (5)

comment:1 Changed 5 years ago by julian.reschke@…

From [2446]:

Replace unneeded "MAY" by "can" (see #513)

comment:2 Changed 5 years ago by julian.reschke@…

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comment:4 Changed 5 years ago by julian.reschke@…

  • Resolution set to incorporated
  • Status changed from new to closed
  • Type changed from design to editorial

all items either fixed or tracked separately

comment:5 Changed 5 years ago by julian.reschke@…

  • Severity changed from In WG Last Call to In IETF LC
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