#461 closed editorial (incorporated)
Editorial suggestions 1
Reported by: | mnot@… | Owned by: | julian.reschke@… |
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Priority: | normal | Milestone: | 23 |
Component: | p4-conditional | Severity: | In WG Last Call |
Keywords: | Cc: |
Description (last modified by julian.reschke@…)
* 2.1 "...avoid confusing cache behaviour." It's not just caches; suggest "...avoid undesired behaviour."
- 3.1 "...instead they MUST respond with the 412 (Precondition Failed) status code." This is too strong; e.g., what if authentication is needed? Suggest an "unless..." clause allowing other error status codes.
* 3.2 needs a references to "unsafe" in p2.
- 3.4 same problem with MUST respond as 3.1.
- 5 Paragraphs two and three repeat what's been said previously in the document; are they necessary?
Change History (5)
comment:1 Changed 9 years ago by julian.reschke@…
comment:2 Changed 9 years ago by julian.reschke@…
- Description modified (diff)
- Owner changed from draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional@… to julian.reschke@…
comment:3 Changed 9 years ago by julian.reschke@…
- Resolution set to incorporated
- Status changed from new to closed
Closing this one; leaving 3.1, 3.4 and 5 alone.
comment:4 Changed 9 years ago by julian.reschke@…
- Milestone changed from unassigned to 23
comment:5 Changed 21 months ago by mnot@…
- Summary changed from Editorial suggestions to Editorial suggestions 1
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editorial improvements (see #461)