#441 closed editorial (incorporated)
P1 editorial nits
Reported by: | julian.reschke@… | Owned by: | draft-ietf-httpbis-p1-messaging@… |
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Priority: | normal | Milestone: | 23 |
Component: | p1-messaging | Severity: | In WG Last Call |
Keywords: | Cc: |
Description (last modified by fielding@…)
Sec 2.6, last para, last sentence: "avoiding" -> "avoided"
Sec 3.1.1, para 5: "No whitespace is allowed inside the method, request-target, and protocol version." I think "or" would read better than "and".
Sec 4.1.2: The ABNF states that all chunks (including last-chunk) may include chunk-ext, so the last line of the first while() loop should be:
read chunk-size, chunk-ext (if any) and CRLF
Sec 6.6, second last para: The first sentence is quite long and it took me several reads to parse it correctly. I'd suggest adding a comma to separate the two ways that the server can receive an ack of the close from the client, e.g.: "... until the connection is closed by the client, or the server is reasonably certain ..."
Sec A.1.2, last para: "need will need" -> "need" or "will need"
Change History (4)
comment:1 Changed 10 years ago by julian.reschke@…
comment:2 Changed 10 years ago by julian.reschke@…
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comment:3 Changed 10 years ago by fielding@…
- Description modified (diff)
- Resolution set to incorporated
- Status changed from new to closed
From [2214]:
editorial fixes (see #441)