Changeset 972 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

Timestamp:

Aug 2, 2010, 6:20:54 AM (9 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

lowercase "effective request URI" throughout, use "target resource" instead of "resource identified by the effective request URI" where possible.

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html (modified) (5 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

@@ -400 +400 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-08-01">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-08-02">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypermedia information systems. HTTP has been in use by the World Wide Web global information initiative since 1990. This document is Part 4 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 4 defines request header fields for indicating conditional requests and the rules for constructing responses to those requests.">
@@ -426 +426 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: February 2, 2011</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: February 3, 2011</td>
                <td class="right">J. Mogul</td>
             </tr>
@@ -483 +483 @@
             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">August 1, 2010</td>
+               <td class="right">August 2, 2010</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -509 +509 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on February 2, 2011.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on February 3, 2011.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2010 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -896 +896 @@
       <div id="rfc.iref.h.1"></div>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.6.1"><a href="#rfc.section.6.1">6.1</a>&nbsp;<a id="header.etag" href="#header.etag">ETag</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.6.1.p.1">The "ETag" response-header field provides the current value of the entity-tag (see <a href="#entity.tags" title="Entity-Tags">Section&nbsp;2</a>) for one representation of the resource identified by the effective request URI. An entity-tag is intended for use as a resource-local
-         identifier for differentiating between representations of the same resource that vary over time or via content negotiation
-         (see <a href="#weak.and.strong.validators" title="Weak and Strong Validators">Section&nbsp;4</a>).
+      <p id="rfc.section.6.1.p.1">The "ETag" response-header field provides the current value of the entity-tag (see <a href="#entity.tags" title="Entity-Tags">Section&nbsp;2</a>) for one representation of the target resource. An entity-tag is intended for use as a resource-local identifier for differentiating
+         between representations of the same resource that vary over time or via content negotiation (see <a href="#weak.and.strong.validators" title="Weak and Strong Validators">Section&nbsp;4</a>).
       </p>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.7"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.4"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.5"></span>  <a href="#header.etag" class="smpl">ETag</a>   = "ETag" ":" <a href="#core.rules" class="smpl">OWS</a> <a href="#header.etag" class="smpl">ETag-v</a>