Changeset 965 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

Timestamp:

30/07/10 06:11:34 (12 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

Addresses #109: Clarify entity / representation / variant terminology

Removed entity-header adjective and ABNF and clarified distinction
between payload and representation.

Uncapitalize the phrase effective request URI so that it doesn't
dominate the prose, and define the term "target resource" to be
used instead of the "resource identified by the effective request URI".

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

@@ -397 +397 @@
 <t>
    If the 206 response is the result of an If-Range request, the response
-   &SHOULD-NOT; include other entity-headers. Otherwise, the response
-   &MUST; include all of the entity-headers that would have been returned
+   &SHOULD-NOT; include other representation header fields. Otherwise, the response
+   &MUST; include all of the representation header fields that would have been returned
    with a 200 (OK) response to the same request.
 </t>
@@ -428 +428 @@
 <t>
    When this status code is returned for a byte-range request, the
-   response &SHOULD; include a Content-Range entity-header field
-   specifying the current length of the selected resource (see <xref target="header.content-range"/>).
+   response &SHOULD; include a Content-Range header field
+   specifying the current length of the representation (see <xref target="header.content-range"/>).
    This response &MUST-NOT; use the multipart/byteranges content-type.
 </t>
@@ -467 +467 @@
    This section defines the syntax and semantics of HTTP/1.1 header fields
    related to range requests and partial responses.
-</t>
-<t>
-   For entity-header fields, both sender and recipient refer to either the
-   client or the server, depending on who sends and who receives the message.
 </t>
 
@@ -523 +519 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="other-range-resp-spec"/>
 <t>
-   The "Content-Range" entity-header field is sent with a partial representation to
-   specify where in the full representation the partial body should be
+   The "Content-Range" header field is sent with a partial representation to
+   specify where in the full representation the payload body should be
    applied.
 </t>
@@ -1632 +1628 @@
     <t>
       <eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/220"/>:
-      "Clarify entity / representation / variant terminology"
-    </t>
-    <t>
-      <eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/220"/>:
       "consider removing the 'changes from 2068' sections"
     </t>