Changeset 849 for draft-ietf-httpbis


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Timestamp:
Jul 12, 2010, 5:41:49 PM (9 years ago)
Author:
fielding@…
Message:

minor prose tweaks - editorial

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draft-ietf-httpbis/latest
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2 edited

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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

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    720720         effectively in many different contexts and for which implementations can evolve independently over time.
    721721      </p>
    722       <p id="rfc.section.1.p.3">HTTP is also designed for use as a generic protocol for translating communication to and from other Internet information systems.
    723          HTTP proxies and gateways provide access to alternative information services by translating their diverse protocols into a
    724          hypertext format that can be viewed and manipulated by clients in the same way as HTTP services.
     722      <p id="rfc.section.1.p.3">HTTP is also designed for use as an intermediation protocol for translating communication to and from non-HTTP information
     723         systems. HTTP proxies and gateways can provide access to alternative information services by translating their diverse protocols
     724         into a hypertext format that can be viewed and manipulated by clients in the same way as HTTP services.
    725725      </p>
    726726      <p id="rfc.section.1.p.4">One consequence of HTTP flexibility is that the protocol cannot be defined in terms of what occurs behind the interface. Instead,
     
    764764         </p>
    765765      </div>
    766       <p id="rfc.section.1.2.p.3">As a syntactical convention, ABNF rule names prefixed with "obs-" denote "obsolete" grammar rules that appear for historical
     766      <p id="rfc.section.1.2.p.3">As a syntactic convention, ABNF rule names prefixed with "obs-" denote "obsolete" grammar rules that appear for historical
    767767         reasons.
    768768      </p>
  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

    r848 r849  
    251251</t>
    252252<t>
    253    HTTP is also designed for use as a generic protocol for translating
    254    communication to and from other Internet information systems.
    255    HTTP proxies and gateways provide access to alternative information
     253   HTTP is also designed for use as an intermediation protocol for translating
     254   communication to and from non-HTTP information systems.
     255   HTTP proxies and gateways can provide access to alternative information
    256256   services by translating their diverse protocols into a hypertext
    257257   format that can be viewed and manipulated by clients in the same way
     
    341341</t>
    342342<t>
    343    As a syntactical convention, ABNF rule names prefixed with "obs-" denote
     343   As a syntactic convention, ABNF rule names prefixed with "obs-" denote
    344344   "obsolete" grammar rules that appear for historical reasons.
    345345</t>
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