Changeset 784 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

Timestamp:

10/03/10 08:45:16 (11 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

re-organize field descriptions for age calculation, preparing for work on #29.

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -19 +19 @@
   <!ENTITY uri                         "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#uri' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY messaging                   "<xref target='Part1' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
-  <!ENTITY clockless                   "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#clockless.origin.server.operation' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY conditional                 "<xref target='Part4' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY partial                     "<xref target='Part5' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
@@ -635 +634 @@
   <list>
     <t>
-      The term "age_value" denotes the value of the Age header, in a form
-      appropriate for arithmetic operation; or 0, if not available.
+      The term "age_value" denotes the value of the Age header (<xref target="header.age"/>),
+      in a form appropriate for arithmetic operation; or 0, if not available.
     </t>
   </list>
@@ -645 +644 @@
     <t>
       HTTP/1.1 requires origin servers to send a Date header, if possible,
-      with every response, giving the time at which the response was generated
-      (see &header-date;). The term "date_value" denotes the value of the Date
-      header, in a form appropriate for arithmetic operations. See
-      &clockless; for requirements regarding responses without a Date
-      response header.<cref source="jre" anchor="TODO-checkref">correct reference?</cref>
+      with every response, giving the time at which the response was generated.
+      The term "date_value" denotes the value of the Date header, in a form
+      appropriate for arithmetic operations. See &header-date; for the definition
+      of the Date header, and for requirements regarding responses without a
+      Date response header.
     </t>
   </list>
@@ -704 +703 @@
                           + (now - request_time)
 </artwork></figure>
-<t>
-  where "request_time" is the time (according to the local clock) when the request that
-  elicited this response was sent.
-</t>
 <t>
   The current_age of a stored response can then be calculated by adding the amount of