Changeset 778 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

Timestamp:

09/03/10 12:20:08 (12 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

aesthetic changes, preparing for work on #29.

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -560 +560 @@
 </artwork>
 </figure>
-
 <t>
   The freshness_lifetime is defined in <xref target="calculating.freshness.lifetime" />;
@@ -658 +657 @@
 <preamble>These are combined as</preamble>
 <artwork type="code">
-    corrected_received_age = max(now - date_value, age_value)
+  corrected_received_age = max(now - date_value, age_value)
 </artwork></figure>
 <t>
@@ -665 +664 @@
 </t>
 <figure><artwork type="code">
-   corrected_initial_age = corrected_received_age
-                         + (now - request_time)
+  corrected_initial_age = corrected_received_age 
+                          + (now - request_time)
 </artwork></figure>
 <t>
@@ -680 +679 @@
   In summary:
 </t>
-<figure><artwork type="code">
-  age_value     - Age header field-value received with the response
-  date_value    - Date header field-value received with the response
-  request_time  - local time when the cache made the request 
-                 resulting in the stored response
-  response_time - local time when the cache received the response
-  now           - current local time
-  
+<t>
+  age_value
+  <list>
+    <t>Age header field-value received with the response.</t>
+  </list>
+</t>
+<t>
+  date_value
+  <list>
+    <t>Date header field-value received with the response.</t>
+  </list>
+</t>
+<t>
+  request_time
+  <list>
+    <t>Local time when the cache made the request resulting in the stored response.</t>
+  </list>
+</t>
+<t>
+  response_time
+  <list>
+    <t>Local time when the cache received the response.</t>
+  </list>
+</t>
+<t>
+  now
+  <list>
+    <t>Current local time.</t>
+  </list>
+</t>
+<figure>
+<preamble>With these definitions, the current_age can be calculated as per:</preamble>
+<artwork type="code">
   apparent_age = max(0, response_time - date_value);
   corrected_received_age = max(apparent_age, age_value);
@@ -2312 +2336 @@
 <section title="Since draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-09" anchor="changes.since.09">
 <t>
-  None yet.
+  No significant changes.
 </t>
 </section>