Changeset 763 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

Timestamp:

28/02/10 15:22:53 (12 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

punctuation

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

@@ -2697 +2697 @@
          the server's option.</t>
 
-      <t>If the response status code conveys a server error, e.g. 500
+      <t>If the response status code conveys a server error, e.g., 500
          (Internal Server Error) or 503 (Service Unavailable), and it is
          inconvenient or impossible to generate a valid Date.</t>
@@ -3470 +3470 @@
 <t>
    HTTP clients are often privy to large amounts of personal information
-   (e.g. the user's name, location, mail address, passwords, encryption
+   (e.g., the user's name, location, mail address, passwords, encryption
    keys, etc.), and &SHOULD; be very careful to prevent unintentional
    leakage of this information.