Changeset 763 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

Timestamp:

Feb 28, 2010, 7:22:53 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

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punctuation

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html (modified) (6 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

@@ -404 +404 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p1-messaging-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-02-17">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-02-28">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. HTTP has been in use by the World Wide Web global information initiative since 1990. This document is Part 1 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 1 provides an overview of HTTP and its associated terminology, defines the &#34;http&#34; and &#34;https&#34; Uniform Resource Identifier (URI) schemes, defines the generic message syntax and parsing requirements for HTTP message frames, and describes general security concerns for implementations.">
@@ -435 +435 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: August 21, 2010</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: September 1, 2010</td>
                <td class="right">HP</td>
             </tr>
@@ -488 +488 @@
             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">February 17, 2010</td>
+               <td class="right">February 28, 2010</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -520 +520 @@
       <p>The list of Internet-Draft Shadow Directories can be accessed at <a href="http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html">http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html</a>.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in August 21, 2010.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in September 1, 2010.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2010 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -1920 +1920 @@
          <li>If the response status code is 100 (Continue) or 101 (Switching Protocols), the response <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> include a Date header field, at the server's option.
          </li>
-         <li>If the response status code conveys a server error, e.g. 500 (Internal Server Error) or 503 (Service Unavailable), and it
+         <li>If the response status code conveys a server error, e.g., 500 (Internal Server Error) or 503 (Service Unavailable), and it
             is inconvenient or impossible to generate a valid Date.
          </li>
@@ -2424 +2424 @@
       </p>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.11.1"><a href="#rfc.section.11.1">11.1</a>&nbsp;<a id="personal.information" href="#personal.information">Personal Information</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.11.1.p.1">HTTP clients are often privy to large amounts of personal information (e.g. the user's name, location, mail address, passwords,
+      <p id="rfc.section.11.1.p.1">HTTP clients are often privy to large amounts of personal information (e.g., the user's name, location, mail address, passwords,
          encryption keys, etc.), and <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> be very careful to prevent unintentional leakage of this information. We very strongly recommend that a convenient interface
          be provided for the user to control dissemination of such information, and that designers and implementors be particularly