Changeset 756 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

Timestamp:

Feb 2, 2010, 4:04:50 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

editorial: consistently uppercase sentence starts after "Note:"

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html (modified) (5 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

@@ -400 +400 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-02-01">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-02-02">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypermedia information systems. HTTP has been in use by the World Wide Web global information initiative since 1990. This document is Part 4 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 4 defines request header fields for indicating conditional requests and the rules for constructing responses to those requests.">
@@ -426 +426 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: August 5, 2010</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: August 6, 2010</td>
                <td class="right">J. Mogul</td>
             </tr>
@@ -483 +483 @@
             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">February 1, 2010</td>
+               <td class="right">February 2, 2010</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -513 +513 @@
       <p>The list of Internet-Draft Shadow Directories can be accessed at <a href="http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html">http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html</a>.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in August 5, 2010.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in August 6, 2010.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2010 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -819 +819 @@
       </p>
       <div class="note" id="rfc.section.5.p.5"> 
-         <p> <b>Note:</b> in order to provide semantically transparent caching, an origin server must avoid reusing a specific strong entity tag value
+         <p> <b>Note:</b> In order to provide semantically transparent caching, an origin server must avoid reusing a specific strong entity tag value
             for two different entities, or reusing a specific weak entity tag value for two semantically different entities. Cache entries
             might persist for arbitrarily long periods, regardless of expiration times, so it might be inappropriate to expect that a