Changeset 755


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Timestamp:
Feb 1, 2010, 6:42:42 AM (9 years ago)
Author:
julian.reschke@…
Message:

editorial: improve list style / sentence ordering in client requirements

Location:
draft-ietf-httpbis/latest
Files:
2 edited

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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

    r754 r755  
    827827      <p id="rfc.section.5.p.6">HTTP/1.1 clients: </p>
    828828      <ul>
    829          <li>If an entity tag has been provided by the origin server, <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> use that entity tag in any cache-conditional request (using If-Match or If-None-Match).
    830          </li>
    831          <li>If only a Last-Modified value has been provided by the origin server, <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> use that value in non-subrange cache-conditional requests (using If-Modified-Since).
    832          </li>
    833          <li>If only a Last-Modified value has been provided by an HTTP/1.0 origin server, <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> use that value in subrange cache-conditional requests (using If-Unmodified-Since:). The user agent <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> provide a way to disable this, in case of difficulty.
    834          </li>
    835          <li>If both an entity tag and a Last-Modified value have been provided by the origin server, <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> use both validators in cache-conditional requests. This allows both HTTP/1.0 and HTTP/1.1 caches to respond appropriately.
     829         <li><em class="bcp14">MUST</em> use that entity tag in any cache-conditional request (using If-Match or If-None-Match) if an entity tag has been provided
     830            by the origin server.
     831         </li>
     832         <li><em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> use the Last-Modified value in non-subrange cache-conditional requests (using If-Modified-Since) if only a Last-Modified value
     833            has been provided by the origin server.
     834         </li>
     835         <li><em class="bcp14">MAY</em> use the Last-Modified value in subrange cache-conditional requests (using If-Unmodified-Since) if only a Last-Modified value
     836            has been provided by an HTTP/1.0 origin server. The user agent <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> provide a way to disable this, in case of difficulty.
     837         </li>
     838         <li><em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> use both validators in cache-conditional requests if both an entity tag and a Last-Modified value have been provided by the
     839            origin server. This allows both HTTP/1.0 and HTTP/1.1 caches to respond appropriately.
    836840         </li>
    837841      </ul>
  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml

    r754 r755  
    620620   HTTP/1.1 clients:
    621621  <list style="symbols">
    622      <t>If an entity tag has been provided by the origin server, &MUST;
    623         use that entity tag in any cache-conditional request (using If-Match
    624         or If-None-Match).</t>
    625 
    626      <t>If only a Last-Modified value has been provided by the origin
    627         server, &SHOULD; use that value in non-subrange cache-conditional
    628         requests (using If-Modified-Since).</t>
    629 
    630      <t>If only a Last-Modified value has been provided by an HTTP/1.0
    631         origin server, &MAY; use that value in subrange cache-conditional
    632         requests (using If-Unmodified-Since:). The user agent &SHOULD;
     622     <t>&MUST; use that entity tag in any cache-conditional request (using
     623        If-Match or If-None-Match) if an entity tag has been provided by the
     624        origin server.</t>
     625
     626     <t>&SHOULD; use the Last-Modified value in non-subrange cache-conditional
     627        requests (using If-Modified-Since) if only a Last-Modified value has
     628        been provided by the origin server. </t>
     629
     630     <t>&MAY; use the Last-Modified value in subrange cache-conditional
     631        requests (using If-Unmodified-Since) if only a Last-Modified value has
     632        been provided by an HTTP/1.0 origin server. The user agent &SHOULD;
    633633        provide a way to disable this, in case of difficulty.</t>
    634634
    635      <t>If both an entity tag and a Last-Modified value have been
    636         provided by the origin server, &SHOULD; use both validators in
    637         cache-conditional requests. This allows both HTTP/1.0 and
    638         HTTP/1.1 caches to respond appropriately.</t>
     635     <t>&SHOULD; use both validators in cache-conditional requests if both an
     636        entity tag and a Last-Modified value have been provided by the origin
     637        server. This allows both HTTP/1.0 and HTTP/1.1 caches to respond
     638        appropriately.</t>
    639639  </list>
    640640</t>
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