Changeset 731 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Timestamp:

Dec 4, 2009, 9:11:47 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

minor improvements to introduction to the GET method (see ​http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/ietf-http-wg/2009OctDec/0224.html)

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p2-semantics.html (modified) (1 diff)
• p2-semantics.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.html

@@ -990 +990 @@
       <div id="rfc.iref.g.8"></div>
       <div id="rfc.iref.m.2"></div>
-      <p id="rfc.section.7.3.p.1">The GET method means retrieve whatever information (in the form of an entity) is identified by the request-target.</p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.7.3.p.2">If the request-target refers to a data-producing process, it is the produced data which shall be returned as the entity in
+      <p id="rfc.section.7.3.p.1">The GET method means retrieve whatever information (in the form of an entity) currently corresponds to the resource identified
+         by the request-target.
+      </p>
+      <p id="rfc.section.7.3.p.2">If the request-target identifies a data-producing process, it is the produced data which shall be returned as the entity in
          the response and not the source text of the process, unless that text happens to be the output of the process.
       </p>

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.xml

@@ -824 +824 @@
 <t>
    The GET method means retrieve whatever information (in the form of an
-   entity) is identified by the request-target.
+   entity) currently corresponds to the resource identified by the
+   request-target.
 </t>
 <t>   
-   If the request-target refers to a data-producing process, it is the
+   If the request-target identifies a data-producing process, it is the
    produced data which shall be returned as the entity in the response and not
    the source text of the process, unless that text happens to be the output of