Changeset 703 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Timestamp:

Sep 27, 2009, 11:22:22 PM (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

remove spurious "only", rephrase explanation (see #194)

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p1-messaging.html (modified) (6 diffs)
• p1-messaging.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

@@ -400 +400 @@
       <meta name="DC.Creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="DC.Identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p1-messaging-latest">
-      <meta name="DC.Date.Issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2009-09-27">
+      <meta name="DC.Date.Issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2009-09-28">
       <meta name="DC.Relation.Replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="DC.Description.Abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. HTTP has been in use by the World Wide Web global information initiative since 1990. This document is Part 1 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 1 provides an overview of HTTP and its associated terminology, defines the &#34;http&#34; and &#34;https&#34; Uniform Resource Identifier (URI) schemes, defines the generic message syntax and parsing requirements for HTTP message frames, and describes general security concerns for implementations.">
@@ -437 +437 @@
          </tr>
          <tr>
-            <td class="header left">Expires: March 31, 2010</td>
+            <td class="header left">Expires: April 1, 2010</td>
             <td class="header right">H. Frystyk</td>
          </tr>
@@ -486 +486 @@
          <tr>
             <td class="header left"></td>
-            <td class="header right">September 27, 2009</td>
+            <td class="header right">September 28, 2009</td>
          </tr>
       </table>
@@ -510 +510 @@
       <p>The list of Internet-Draft Shadow Directories can be accessed at &lt;<a href="http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html">http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html</a>&gt;.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in March 31, 2010.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in April 1, 2010.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2009 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -816 +816 @@
   <a href="#rule.quoted-string" class="smpl">obs-text</a>       = %x80-FF
 </pre><div id="rule.quoted-pair">
-         <p id="rfc.section.1.2.2.p.12">  The backslash character ("\") can be used as a single-character quoting mechanism only within quoted-string constructs:</p>
+         <p id="rfc.section.1.2.2.p.12">  The backslash character ("\") can be used as a single-character quoting mechanism within quoted-string constructs:</p>
       </div>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.8"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.21"></span>  <a href="#rule.quoted-pair" class="smpl">quoted-pair</a>    = "\" ( <a href="#core.rules" class="smpl">WSP</a> / <a href="#core.rules" class="smpl">VCHAR</a> / <a href="#rule.quoted-string" class="smpl">obs-text</a> ) 
-</pre><p id="rfc.section.1.2.2.p.14">Producers <em class="bcp14">SHOULD NOT</em> escape characters that do not require escaping (DQUOTE and the backslash character).
+</pre><p id="rfc.section.1.2.2.p.14">Producers <em class="bcp14">SHOULD NOT</em> escape characters that do not require escaping (i.e., other than DQUOTE and the backslash character).
       </p>
       <h3 id="rfc.section.1.2.3"><a href="#rfc.section.1.2.3">1.2.3</a>&nbsp;<a id="abnf.dependencies" href="#abnf.dependencies">ABNF Rules defined in other Parts of the Specification</a></h3>
@@ -1163 +1163 @@
                  ; <a href="#rule.whitespace" class="smpl">OWS</a> / &lt;<a href="#core.rules" class="smpl">VCHAR</a> except "(", ")", and "\"&gt; / <a href="#rule.quoted-string" class="smpl">obs-text</a>
 </pre><div id="rule.quoted-cpair">
-         <p id="rfc.section.3.2.p.12">  The backslash character ("\") can be used as a single-character quoting mechanism only within comment constructs:</p>
+         <p id="rfc.section.3.2.p.12">  The backslash character ("\") can be used as a single-character quoting mechanism within comment constructs:</p>
       </div>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.25"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.41"></span>  <a href="#rule.quoted-cpair" class="smpl">quoted-cpair</a>    = "\" ( <a href="#core.rules" class="smpl">WSP</a> / <a href="#core.rules" class="smpl">VCHAR</a> / <a href="#rule.quoted-string" class="smpl">obs-text</a> ) 
-</pre><p id="rfc.section.3.2.p.14">Producers <em class="bcp14">SHOULD NOT</em> escape characters that do not require escaping (the backslash character "\" and the parentheses "(" and ")").
+</pre><p id="rfc.section.3.2.p.14">Producers <em class="bcp14">SHOULD NOT</em> escape characters that do not require escaping (i.e., other than the backslash character "\" and the parentheses "(" and ")").
       </p>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.3.3"><a href="#rfc.section.3.3">3.3</a>&nbsp;<a id="message.body" href="#message.body">Message Body</a></h2>

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

@@ -460 +460 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="quoted-pair"/>
    The backslash character ("\") can be used as a single-character
-   quoting mechanism only within quoted-string constructs:
+   quoting mechanism within quoted-string constructs:
 </t>
 <figure><artwork type="abnf2616"><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="quoted-pair"/>
@@ -467 +467 @@
 <t>
    Producers &SHOULD-NOT; escape characters that do not require escaping
-   (DQUOTE and the backslash character).
+   (i.e., other than DQUOTE and the backslash character).
 </t>
 </section>
@@ -1171 +1171 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="quoted-cpair"/>
    The backslash character ("\") can be used as a single-character
-   quoting mechanism only within comment constructs:
+   quoting mechanism within comment constructs:
 </t>
 <figure><artwork type="abnf2616"><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="quoted-cpair"/>
@@ -1178 +1178 @@
 <t>
    Producers &SHOULD-NOT; escape characters that do not require escaping
-   (the backslash character "\" and the parentheses "(" and ")").
+   (i.e., other than the backslash character "\" and the parentheses "(" and
+   ")").
 </t>
 </section>