Changeset 699 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p3-payload.xml

Timestamp:

Sep 26, 2009, 4:42:37 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

editorial: enhance readability of header introductions

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p3-payload.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p3-payload.xml

@@ -1495 +1495 @@
 <t>
    The "Content-MD5" entity-header field, as defined in <xref target="RFC1864"/>, is
-   an MD5 digest of the entity-body for the purpose of providing an
-   end-to-end message integrity check (MIC) of the entity-body. (Note: a
-   MIC is good for detecting accidental modification of the entity-body
-   in transit, but is not proof against malicious attacks.)
+   an MD5 digest of the entity-body that provides an end-to-end message
+   integrity check (MIC) of the entity-body. Note that a MIC is good for
+   detecting accidental modification of the entity-body in transit, but is not
+   proof against malicious attacks.
 </t>
 <figure><artwork type="abnf2616"><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="Content-MD5"/><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="Content-MD5-v"/>