Changeset 698 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.html

Timestamp:

Sep 26, 2009, 3:09:09 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

editorial: enhance readability of header introductions

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.html (modified) (6 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.html

@@ -396 +396 @@
       <meta name="DC.Creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="DC.Identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-latest">
-      <meta name="DC.Date.Issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2009-09-25">
+      <meta name="DC.Date.Issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2009-09-26">
       <meta name="DC.Relation.Replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="DC.Description.Abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypermedia information systems. HTTP has been in use by the World Wide Web global information initiative since 1990. This document is Part 5 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 5 defines range-specific requests and the rules for constructing and combining responses to those requests.">
@@ -428 +428 @@
          </tr>
          <tr>
-            <td class="header left">Expires: March 29, 2010</td>
+            <td class="header left">Expires: March 30, 2010</td>
             <td class="header right">HP</td>
          </tr>
@@ -481 +481 @@
          <tr>
             <td class="header left"></td>
-            <td class="header right">September 25, 2009</td>
+            <td class="header right">September 26, 2009</td>
          </tr>
       </table>
@@ -505 +505 @@
       <p>The list of Internet-Draft Shadow Directories can be accessed at &lt;<a href="http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html">http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html</a>&gt;.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in March 29, 2010.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in March 30, 2010.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2009 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -694 +694 @@
       <div id="rfc.iref.h.1"></div>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.5.1"><a href="#rfc.section.5.1">5.1</a>&nbsp;<a id="header.accept-ranges" href="#header.accept-ranges">Accept-Ranges</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.5.1.p.1">The "Accept-Ranges" response-header field allows the server to indicate its acceptance of range requests for a resource:</p>
+      <p id="rfc.section.5.1.p.1">The "Accept-Ranges" response-header field allows a resource to indicate its acceptance of range requests.</p>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.5"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.4"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.5"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.6"></span>  <a href="#header.accept-ranges" class="smpl">Accept-Ranges</a>     = "Accept-Ranges" ":" <a href="#core.rules" class="smpl">OWS</a> <a href="#header.accept-ranges" class="smpl">Accept-Ranges-v</a>
   <a href="#header.accept-ranges" class="smpl">Accept-Ranges-v</a>   = <a href="#header.accept-ranges" class="smpl">acceptable-ranges</a>
@@ -864 +864 @@
       </ul>
       <h3 id="rfc.section.5.4.2"><a href="#rfc.section.5.4.2">5.4.2</a>&nbsp;<a id="range.retrieval.requests" href="#range.retrieval.requests">Range Retrieval Requests</a></h3>
-      <p id="rfc.section.5.4.2.p.1">HTTP retrieval requests using conditional or unconditional GET methods <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> request one or more sub-ranges of the entity, instead of the entire entity, using the Range request header, which applies
-         to the entity returned as the result of the request:
+      <p id="rfc.section.5.4.2.p.1">The "Range" request-header field defines the GET method (conditional or not) to request one or more sub-ranges of the response
+         entity-body, instead of the entire entity body.
       </p>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.23"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.23"></span>  <a href="#range.retrieval.requests" class="smpl">Range</a>   = "Range" ":" <a href="#core.rules" class="smpl">OWS</a> <a href="#range.retrieval.requests" class="smpl">Range-v</a>