Changeset 697 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p7-auth.xml

Timestamp:

Sep 25, 2009, 7:43:16 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

editorial: rephrase header introductions ("the *-header field 'foobar'" -> "the "foobar" *-header field")

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p7-auth.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p7-auth.xml

@@ -342 +342 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="Authorization-v"/>
 <t>
-      A user agent that wishes to authenticate itself with a server--
-      usually, but not necessarily, after receiving a 401 response--does
-      so by including an Authorization request-header field with the
-      request.  The field "Authorization" consists of credentials
-      containing the authentication information of the user agent for
-      the realm of the resource being requested.
+   A user agent that wishes to authenticate itself with a server--
+   usually, but not necessarily, after receiving a 401 response--does
+   so by including an "Authorization" request-header field with the
+   request.  The field value consists of credentials
+   containing the authentication information of the user agent for
+   the realm of the resource being requested.
 </t>
 <figure><artwork type="abnf2616"><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="Authorization"/><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="Authorization-v"/>
@@ -399 +399 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="Proxy-Authenticate-v"/>
 <t>
-   The response-header field "Proxy-Authenticate" &MUST; be included as part
+   The "Proxy-Authenticate" response-header field &MUST; be included as part
    of a 407 (Proxy Authentication Required) response. The field value
    consists of a challenge that indicates the authentication scheme and
@@ -427 +427 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="Proxy-Authorization-v"/>
 <t>
-   The request-header field "Proxy-Authorization" allows the client to
+   The "Proxy-Authorization" request-header field allows the client to
    identify itself (or its user) to a proxy which requires
    authentication. The Proxy-Authorization field value consists of
@@ -458 +458 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="WWW-Authenticate-v"/>
 <t>
-   The WWW-Authenticate response-header field &MUST; be included in 401
+   The "WWW-Authenticate" response-header field &MUST; be included in 401
    (Unauthorized) response messages. The field value consists of at
    least one challenge that indicates the authentication scheme(s) and