Changeset 697 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

Timestamp:

25/09/09 14:43:16 (12 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

editorial: rephrase header introductions ("the *-header field 'foobar'" -> "the "foobar" *-header field")

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml (modified) (6 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -29 +29 @@
   <!ENTITY header-via                  "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#header.via' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY header-last-modified        "<xref target='Part4' x:rel='#header.last-modified' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
-  <!ENTITY header-fields             "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#header.fields' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
+  <!ENTITY header-fields               "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#header.fields' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY message-length              "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#message.length' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY safe-methods                "<xref target='Part2' x:rel='#safe.methods' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
@@ -895 +895 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="age-value"/>
 <t>
-  The response-header field "Age" conveys the sender's estimate of the amount of time since
+  The "Age" response-header field conveys the sender's estimate of the amount of time since
   the response (or its validation) was generated at the origin server. Age values are
   calculated as specified in <xref target="age.calculations" />.
@@ -933 +933 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="cache-response-directive"/>
 <t>
-  The general-header field "Cache-Control" is used to specify directives that &MUST; be
+  The "Cache-Control" general-header field is used to specify directives that &MUST; be
   obeyed by all caches along the request/response chain. The directives specify behavior
   intended to prevent caches from adversely interfering with the request or response. Cache
@@ -1249 +1249 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="Expires-v"/>
 <t>
-  The entity-header field "Expires" gives the date/time after which the response is
+  The "Expires" entity-header field gives the date/time after which the response is
   considered stale. See <xref target="expiration.model" /> for further discussion of the
   freshness model.
@@ -1294 +1294 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="pragma-directive"/>
 <t>
-  The general-header field "Pragma" is used to include implementation-specific directives
+  The "Pragma" general-header field is used to include implementation-specific directives
   that might apply to any recipient along the request/response chain. All pragma directives
   specify optional behavior from the viewpoint of the protocol; however, some systems
@@ -1382 +1382 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="warn-text"/>
 <t>
-  The general-header field "Warning" is used to carry additional information about the status
+  The "Warning" general-header field is used to carry additional information about the status
   or transformation of a message that might not be reflected in the message. This
   information is typically used to warn about possible incorrectness introduced by caching