Changeset 697 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

Timestamp:

Sep 25, 2009, 7:43:16 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

editorial: rephrase header introductions ("the *-header field 'foobar'" -> "the "foobar" *-header field")

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

@@ -458 +458 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="acceptable-ranges"/>
 <t>
-      The response-header "Accept-Ranges" field allows the server to
-      indicate its acceptance of range requests for a resource:
+   The "Accept-Ranges" response-header field allows the server to
+   indicate its acceptance of range requests for a resource:
 </t>
 <figure><artwork type="abnf2616"><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="Accept-Ranges"/><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="Accept-Ranges-v"/><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="acceptable-ranges"/>
@@ -501 +501 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="other-range-resp-spec"/>
 <t>
-   The entity-header "Content-Range" is sent with a partial entity-body to
+   The "Content-Range" entity-header field is sent with a partial entity-body to
    specify where in the full entity-body the partial body should be
    applied. Range units are defined in <xref target="range.units"/>.
@@ -655 +655 @@
 </t>
 <t>
-   The request header "If-Range" allows a client to "short-circuit" the second
+   The "If-Range" request-header field allows a client to "short-circuit" the second
    request. Informally, its meaning is `if the entity is unchanged, send
    me the part(s) that I am missing; otherwise, send me the entire new