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Sep 25, 2009, 7:43:16 AM (10 years ago)
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julian.reschke@…
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editorial: rephrase header introductions ("the *-header field 'foobar'" -> "the "foobar" *-header field")

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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.html

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    396396      <meta name="DC.Creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
    397397      <meta name="DC.Identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-latest">
    398       <meta name="DC.Date.Issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2009-09-01">
     398      <meta name="DC.Date.Issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2009-09-25">
    399399      <meta name="DC.Relation.Replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
    400400      <meta name="DC.Description.Abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypermedia information systems. HTTP has been in use by the World Wide Web global information initiative since 1990. This document is Part 5 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 5 defines range-specific requests and the rules for constructing and combining responses to those requests.">
     
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    430             <td class="header left">Expires: March 5, 2010</td>
     430            <td class="header left">Expires: March 29, 2010</td>
    431431            <td class="header right">HP</td>
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    482482            <td class="header left"></td>
    483             <td class="header right">September 1, 2009</td>
     483            <td class="header right">September 25, 2009</td>
    484484         </tr>
    485485      </table>
     
    505505      <p>The list of Internet-Draft Shadow Directories can be accessed at &lt;<a href="http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html">http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html</a>&gt;.
    506506      </p>
    507       <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in March 5, 2010.</p>
     507      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in March 29, 2010.</p>
    508508      <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
    509509      <p>Copyright © 2009 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
     
    694694      <div id="rfc.iref.h.1"></div>
    695695      <h2 id="rfc.section.5.1"><a href="#rfc.section.5.1">5.1</a>&nbsp;<a id="header.accept-ranges" href="#header.accept-ranges">Accept-Ranges</a></h2>
    696       <p id="rfc.section.5.1.p.1">The response-header "Accept-Ranges" field allows the server to indicate its acceptance of range requests for a resource:</p>
     696      <p id="rfc.section.5.1.p.1">The "Accept-Ranges" response-header field allows the server to indicate its acceptance of range requests for a resource:</p>
    697697      <div id="rfc.figure.u.5"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.4"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.5"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.6"></span>  <a href="#header.accept-ranges" class="smpl">Accept-Ranges</a>     = "Accept-Ranges" ":" <a href="#core.rules" class="smpl">OWS</a> <a href="#header.accept-ranges" class="smpl">Accept-Ranges-v</a>
    698698  <a href="#header.accept-ranges" class="smpl">Accept-Ranges-v</a>   = <a href="#header.accept-ranges" class="smpl">acceptable-ranges</a>
     
    710710      <div id="rfc.iref.h.2"></div>
    711711      <h2 id="rfc.section.5.2"><a href="#rfc.section.5.2">5.2</a>&nbsp;<a id="header.content-range" href="#header.content-range">Content-Range</a></h2>
    712       <p id="rfc.section.5.2.p.1">The entity-header "Content-Range" is sent with a partial entity-body to specify where in the full entity-body the partial
     712      <p id="rfc.section.5.2.p.1">The "Content-Range" entity-header field is sent with a partial entity-body to specify where in the full entity-body the partial
    713713         body should be applied. Range units are defined in <a href="#range.units" title="Range Units">Section&nbsp;2</a>.
    714714      </p>
     
    794794         to obtain the entire current entity-body.
    795795      </p>
    796       <p id="rfc.section.5.3.p.2">The request header "If-Range" allows a client to "short-circuit" the second request. Informally, its meaning is `if the entity
    797          is unchanged, send me the part(s) that I am missing; otherwise, send me the entire new entity'.
     796      <p id="rfc.section.5.3.p.2">The "If-Range" request-header field allows a client to "short-circuit" the second request. Informally, its meaning is `if
     797         the entity is unchanged, send me the part(s) that I am missing; otherwise, send me the entire new entity'.
    798798      </p>
    799799      <div id="rfc.figure.u.14"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.13"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.14"></span>  <a href="#header.if-range" class="smpl">If-Range</a>   = "If-Range" ":" <a href="#core.rules" class="smpl">OWS</a> <a href="#header.if-range" class="smpl">If-Range-v</a>
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