Changeset 697 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

Timestamp:

Sep 25, 2009, 7:43:16 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

editorial: rephrase header introductions ("the *-header field 'foobar'" -> "the "foobar" *-header field")

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html (modified) (10 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

@@ -396 +396 @@
       <meta name="DC.Creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="DC.Identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-latest">
-      <meta name="DC.Date.Issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2009-09-01">
+      <meta name="DC.Date.Issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2009-09-25">
       <meta name="DC.Relation.Replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="DC.Description.Abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypermedia information systems. HTTP has been in use by the World Wide Web global information initiative since 1990. This document is Part 4 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 4 defines request header fields for indicating conditional requests and the rules for constructing responses to those requests.">
@@ -428 +428 @@
          </tr>
          <tr>
-            <td class="header left">Expires: March 5, 2010</td>
+            <td class="header left">Expires: March 29, 2010</td>
             <td class="header right">HP</td>
          </tr>
@@ -481 +481 @@
          <tr>
             <td class="header left"></td>
-            <td class="header right">September 1, 2009</td>
+            <td class="header right">September 25, 2009</td>
          </tr>
       </table>
@@ -505 +505 @@
       <p>The list of Internet-Draft Shadow Directories can be accessed at &lt;<a href="http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html">http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html</a>&gt;.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in March 5, 2010.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire in March 29, 2010.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2009 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -858 +858 @@
       <div id="rfc.iref.h.1"></div>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.6.1"><a href="#rfc.section.6.1">6.1</a>&nbsp;<a id="header.etag" href="#header.etag">ETag</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.6.1.p.1">The response-header field "ETag" provides the current value of the entity tag (see <a href="#entity.tags" title="Entity Tags">Section&nbsp;2</a>) for the requested variant. The headers used with entity tags are described in Sections <a href="#header.if-match" id="rfc.xref.header.if-match.2" title="If-Match">6.2</a> and <a href="#header.if-none-match" id="rfc.xref.header.if-none-match.2" title="If-None-Match">6.4</a> of this document, and in <a href="p5-range.html#header.if-range" title="If-Range">Section 5.3</a> of <a href="#Part5" id="rfc.xref.Part5.4"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 5: Range Requests and Partial Responses">[Part5]</cite></a>. The entity tag <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> be used for comparison with other entities from the same resource (see <a href="#weak.and.strong.validators" title="Weak and Strong Validators">Section&nbsp;4</a>).
+      <p id="rfc.section.6.1.p.1">The "ETag" response-header field provides the current value of the entity tag (see <a href="#entity.tags" title="Entity Tags">Section&nbsp;2</a>) for the requested variant. The headers used with entity tags are described in Sections <a href="#header.if-match" id="rfc.xref.header.if-match.2" title="If-Match">6.2</a> and <a href="#header.if-none-match" id="rfc.xref.header.if-none-match.2" title="If-None-Match">6.4</a> of this document, and in <a href="p5-range.html#header.if-range" title="If-Range">Section 5.3</a> of <a href="#Part5" id="rfc.xref.Part5.4"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 5: Range Requests and Partial Responses">[Part5]</cite></a>. The entity tag <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> be used for comparison with other entities from the same resource (see <a href="#weak.and.strong.validators" title="Weak and Strong Validators">Section&nbsp;4</a>).
       </p>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.4"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.4"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.5"></span>  <a href="#header.etag" class="smpl">ETag</a>   = "ETag" ":" <a href="#core.rules" class="smpl">OWS</a> <a href="#header.etag" class="smpl">ETag-v</a>
@@ -879 +879 @@
       <div id="rfc.iref.h.2"></div>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.6.2"><a href="#rfc.section.6.2">6.2</a>&nbsp;<a id="header.if-match" href="#header.if-match">If-Match</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.6.2.p.1">The request-header field "If-Match" is used with a method to make it conditional. A client that has one or more entities previously
+      <p id="rfc.section.6.2.p.1">The "If-Match" request-header field is used with a method to make it conditional. A client that has one or more entities previously
          obtained from the resource can verify that one of those entities is current by including a list of their associated entity
          tags in the If-Match header field. Entity tags are defined in <a href="#entity.tags" title="Entity Tags">Section&nbsp;2</a>. The purpose of this feature is to allow efficient updates of cached information with a minimum amount of transaction overhead.
@@ -912 +912 @@
       <div id="rfc.iref.h.3"></div>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.6.3"><a href="#rfc.section.6.3">6.3</a>&nbsp;<a id="header.if-modified-since" href="#header.if-modified-since">If-Modified-Since</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.6.3.p.1">The request-header field "If-Modified-Since" is used with a method to make it conditional: if the requested variant has not
+      <p id="rfc.section.6.3.p.1">The "If-Modified-Since" request-header field is used with a method to make it conditional: if the requested variant has not
          been modified since the time specified in this field, an entity will not be returned from the server; instead, a 304 (Not
          Modified) response will be returned without any message-body.
@@ -959 +959 @@
       <div id="rfc.iref.h.4"></div>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.6.4"><a href="#rfc.section.6.4">6.4</a>&nbsp;<a id="header.if-none-match" href="#header.if-none-match">If-None-Match</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.6.4.p.1">The request-header field "If-None-Match" is used with a method to make it conditional. A client that has one or more entities
+      <p id="rfc.section.6.4.p.1">The "If-None-Match" request-header field is used with a method to make it conditional. A client that has one or more entities
          previously obtained from the resource can verify that none of those entities is current by including a list of their associated
          entity tags in the If-None-Match header field. The purpose of this feature is to allow efficient updates of cached information
@@ -993 +993 @@
       <div id="rfc.iref.h.5"></div>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.6.5"><a href="#rfc.section.6.5">6.5</a>&nbsp;<a id="header.if-unmodified-since" href="#header.if-unmodified-since">If-Unmodified-Since</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.6.5.p.1">The request-header field "If-Unmodified-Since" is used with a method to make it conditional. If the requested resource has
+      <p id="rfc.section.6.5.p.1">The "If-Unmodified-Since" request-header field is used with a method to make it conditional. If the requested resource has
          not been modified since the time specified in this field, the server <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> perform the requested operation as if the If-Unmodified-Since header were not present.
       </p>
@@ -1013 +1013 @@
       <div id="rfc.iref.h.6"></div>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.6.6"><a href="#rfc.section.6.6">6.6</a>&nbsp;<a id="header.last-modified" href="#header.last-modified">Last-Modified</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.6.6.p.1">The entity-header field "Last-Modified" indicates the date and time at which the origin server believes the variant was last
+      <p id="rfc.section.6.6.p.1">The "Last-Modified" entity-header field indicates the date and time at which the origin server believes the variant was last
          modified.
       </p>