Changeset 677 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

Timestamp:

Aug 12, 2009, 6:21:32 PM (10 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

editorial: wordsmith description of messages

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

@@ -550 +550 @@
    protocol version, followed by MIME-like header fields containing
    request modifiers, client information, and payload metadata, an empty
-   line, and finally the payload body (if any).
-   The server response (<xref target="response"/>) begins with a status line,
-   including the protocol version, a success or error code, and textual
+   line to indicate the end of the header section, and finally the payload
+   body (if any).
+</t>
+<t>
+   A server responds to the client's request by sending an HTTP response
+   message (<xref target="response"/>), beginning with a status line that
+   includes the protocol version, a success or error code, and textual
    reason phrase, followed by MIME-like header fields containing server
-   information, resource metadata, payload metadata, an empty line, and
-   finally the payload body (if any).
+   information, resource metadata, and payload metadata, an empty line to
+   indicate the end of the header section, and finally the payload body (if any).
 </t>
 <t>