Changeset 578 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

Timestamp:

May 8, 2009, 8:02:25 AM (11 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

editorial: removed an unnecessary reference to RFC 2068, made another one more specific

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

@@ -1776 +1776 @@
    these performance problems and results from a prototype
    implementation are available <xref target="Pad1995"/> <xref target="Spe"/>. Implementation experience and
-   measurements of actual HTTP/1.1 (<xref target="RFC2068" x:fmt="none">RFC 2068</xref>) implementations show good
+   measurements of actual HTTP/1.1 implementations show good
    results <xref target="Nie1997"/>. Alternatives have also been explored, for example,
    T/TCP <xref target="Tou1998"/>.
@@ -1909 +1909 @@
 <t>
    A proxy server &MUST-NOT; establish a HTTP/1.1 persistent connection
-   with an HTTP/1.0 client (but see <xref target="RFC2068"/> for information and
-   discussion of the problems with the Keep-Alive header implemented by
-   many HTTP/1.0 clients).
+   with an HTTP/1.0 client (but see <xref x:sec="19.7.1" x:fmt="of" target="RFC2068"/>
+   for information and discussion of the problems with the Keep-Alive header
+   implemented by many HTTP/1.0 clients).
 </t>
 </section>
@@ -4009 +4009 @@
 <t>
    The original HTTP/1.0 form of persistent connections (the Connection:
-   Keep-Alive and Keep-Alive header) is documented in <xref target="RFC2068"/>.
+   Keep-Alive and Keep-Alive header) is documented in <xref x:sec="19.7.1" x:fmt="of" target="RFC2068"/>.
 </t>
 </section>