Changeset 554 for draft-ietf-httpbis/06/RELEASENOTES.txt

Timestamp:

09/03/09 13:35:00 (14 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

minor fixes + Yves' feedback incorporated

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/06/RELEASENOTES.txt (modified) (4 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/06/RELEASENOTES.txt

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-The -06 drafts contain quite a substantive changes, plus major rewrites in 
-Parts 1 (URIs, Connections, and Message Parsing) and 6 (Caching). All
-non-editorial changes should be mentioned in the "Changes Since ..." 
+The -06 drafts contain quite a number of substantive changes, plus major
+rewrites in Parts 1 (URIs, Connections, and Message Parsing) and 6 (Caching).
+All non-editorial changes should be mentioned in the "Changes Since ..." 
 appendices; diffs are available from tools.ietf.org (linked from the HTMLized
 versions) and from
@@ -9 +9 @@
 
 - Many parts of Part 6 (Caching) have been rewritten from scratch, resulting 
-  in a more compact spec. There are several open issues and TODOS related
-  to this change, so please pay attention to the inlined comments.
+  in a more concise spec. There are several open issues and TODOS related
+  to this change, so please carefully review this part in general, and also
+  pay attention to the inlined comments.
   
 - All the issues around the BNF format and implied LWS have been resolved, see
@@ -20 +21 @@
   
 We think the issue below have been resolved with these drafts, and are 
-planning to close them soonish:
+planning to close them soon:
 
 - #30: "Header LWS" (<http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/30>)
@@ -30 +31 @@
 - #111: "Use of TEXT" (<http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/111>)
 
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