Changeset 543 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

Timestamp:

Mar 6, 2009, 8:15:17 AM (11 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

Resolve #36: In P2..P7, mention list rule defined in P1; also point to Appendix containing collected ABNF with list rule being expanded (closes #36)

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

@@ -35 +35 @@
 <?rfc-ext include-references-in-index="yes" ?>
 <rfc obsoletes="2616" category="std" x:maturity-level="draft"
-     ipr="pre5378Trust200902" docName="draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-&ID-VERSION;"
-     xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'>
+     ipr="pre5378Trust200902" docName="draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-&ID-VERSION;"     xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'>
 <front>
 
@@ -263 +262 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="WSP"/>
 <t>
-  This specification uses the ABNF syntax defined in &notation;.
+  This specification uses the ABNF syntax defined in &notation; (which
+  extends the syntax defined in <xref target="RFC5234"/> with a list rule).
+  <xref target="collected.abnf"/> shows the collected ABNF, with the list
+  rule expanded.
+</t>
+<t>
   The following core rules are included by
   reference, as defined in <xref target="RFC5234" x:fmt="," x:sec="B.1"/>:
@@ -1554 +1558 @@
 </t>
 <t>
-  Ongoing work on ABNF conversion (<eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/36"/>):
+  Final work on ABNF conversion (<eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/36"/>):
   <list style="symbols"> 
     <t>