Changeset 480 for draft-ietf-httpbis

Timestamp:

04/03/09 03:42:30 (13 years ago)

Author:

mnot@…

Message:

Remove excessively wordy wordiness and duplicative duplication.

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest-roy/p6-cache.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest-roy/p6-cache.xml

@@ -471 +471 @@
       <section anchor="expiration.model" title="Freshness Model">
 
-        <t>HTTP caching works best when caches can entirely avoid making requests to the origin
-          server. When a response is "fresh" in the cache, it can be used to satisfy subsequent
-          requests without contacting the origin server.</t>
+        <t>When a response is "fresh" in the cache, it can be used to satisfy subsequent
+          requests without contacting the origin server, thereby improving efficiency.</t>
         <t>This mechanism applies only to responses taken from a cache and not to first-hand responses.
           It cannot be used to force a user agent to refresh its display or reload a resource; its