Changeset 480


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Timestamp:
Mar 3, 2009, 7:42:30 PM (11 years ago)
Author:
mnot@…
Message:

Remove excessively wordy wordiness and duplicative duplication.

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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest-roy/p6-cache.xml

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    471471      <section anchor="expiration.model" title="Freshness Model">
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    473         <t>HTTP caching works best when caches can entirely avoid making requests to the origin
    474           server. When a response is "fresh" in the cache, it can be used to satisfy subsequent
    475           requests without contacting the origin server.</t>
     473        <t>When a response is "fresh" in the cache, it can be used to satisfy subsequent
     474          requests without contacting the origin server, thereby improving efficiency.</t>
    476475        <t>This mechanism applies only to responses taken from a cache and not to first-hand responses.
    477476          It cannot be used to force a user agent to refresh its display or reload a resource; its
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