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Dec 13, 2007, 8:57:24 PM (12 years ago)
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fielding@…
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Add an editorial note about status and list.
Streamline the new references and place them up front.

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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

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    152152</t>
    153153</abstract>
     154
     155<note title="Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)">
     156  <t>
     157    This version of the HTTP specification contains only minimal editorial
     158    changes from <xref target="RFC2616"/> (abstract, introductory paragraph,
     159    and authors' addresses).  All other changes are due to partitioning the
     160    original into seven mostly independent parts.  The intent is for readers
     161    of future drafts to able to use draft 00 as the basis for comparison
     162    when the WG makes later changes to the specification text.  This draft
     163    will shortly be followed by draft 01 (containing the first round of changes
     164    that have already been agreed to on the mailing list). There is no point in
     165    reviewing this draft other than to verify that the partitioning has been
     166    done correctly.  Roy T. Fielding, Yves Lafon, and Julian Reschke
     167    will be the editors after draft 00 is submitted.
     168  </t>
     169  <t>
     170    Discussion of this draft should take place on the HTTPBIS working group
     171    mailing list (ietf-http-wg@w3.org). The current issues list is
     172    at <eref target="http://www.w3.org/Protocols/HTTP/1.1/rfc2616bis/issues/"/>
     173    and related documents (including fancy diffs) can be found at
     174    <eref target="http://www3.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/"/>.
     175  </t>
     176</note>
    154177</front>
    155178<middle>
     
    676699
    677700<reference anchor="Part1">
    678   <front>
    679     <title abbrev="HTTP/1.1">HTTP/1.1, part 1: URIs, Connections, and Message Parsing</title>
    680  
    681     <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="Roy T. Fielding" role="editor">
    682       <organization abbrev="Day Software">Day Software</organization>
    683       <address>
    684         <email>fielding@gbiv.com</email>
    685       </address>
    686     </author>
    687  
    688     <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="Jim Gettys">
    689       <organization>One Laptop per Child</organization>
    690       <address>
    691         <email>jg@laptop.org</email>
    692       </address>
    693     </author>
    694    
    695     <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="Jeffrey C. Mogul">
    696       <organization abbrev="HP">Hewlett-Packard Company</organization>
    697       <address>
    698         <email>JeffMogul@acm.org</email>
    699       </address>
    700     </author>
    701  
    702     <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="Henrik Frystyk Nielsen">
    703       <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    704       <address>
    705         <email>henrikn@microsoft.com</email>
    706       </address>
    707     </author>
    708  
    709     <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="Larry Masinter">
    710       <organization abbrev="Adobe Systems">Adobe Systems, Incorporated</organization>
    711       <address>
    712         <email>LMM@acm.org</email>
    713       </address>
    714     </author>
    715    
    716     <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach">
    717       <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    718       <address>
    719         <email>paulle@microsoft.com</email>
    720       </address>
    721     </author>
    722      
    723     <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="Tim Berners-Lee">
    724       <organization abbrev="W3C/MIT">World Wide Web Consortium</organization>
    725       <address>
    726         <email>timbl@w3.org</email>
    727       </address>
    728     </author>
    729  
    730     <date month="&ID-MONTH;" year="&ID-YEAR;"/>
    731   </front>
    732   <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-fielding-p1-messaging-&ID-VERSION;"/>
    733   <x:source href="p1-messaging.xml" basename="p1-messaging"/>
     701   <front>
     702      <title abbrev="HTTP/1.1">HTTP/1.1, part 1: URIs, Connections, and Message Parsing</title>
     703      <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="Roy T. Fielding" role="editor">
     704         <organization abbrev="Day Software">Day Software</organization>
     705         <address><email>fielding@gbiv.com</email></address>
     706      </author>
     707      <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="Jim Gettys">
     708         <organization>One Laptop per Child</organization>
     709         <address><email>jg@laptop.org</email></address>
     710      </author>
     711      <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="Jeffrey C. Mogul">
     712         <organization abbrev="HP">Hewlett-Packard Company</organization>
     713         <address><email>JeffMogul@acm.org</email></address>
     714      </author>
     715      <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="Henrik Frystyk Nielsen">
     716         <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
     717         <address><email>henrikn@microsoft.com</email></address>
     718      </author>
     719      <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="Larry Masinter">
     720         <organization abbrev="Adobe Systems">Adobe Systems, Incorporated</organization>
     721         <address><email>LMM@acm.org</email></address>
     722      </author>
     723      <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach">
     724         <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
     725         <address><email>paulle@microsoft.com</email></address>
     726      </author>
     727      <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="Tim Berners-Lee">
     728         <organization abbrev="W3C/MIT">World Wide Web Consortium</organization>
     729         <address><email>timbl@w3.org</email></address>
     730      </author>
     731      <date month="&ID-MONTH;" year="&ID-YEAR;"/>
     732   </front>
     733   <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-fielding-p1-messaging-&ID-VERSION;"/>
     734   <x:source href="p1-messaging.xml" basename="p1-messaging"/>
    734735</reference>
    735736
    736737<reference anchor="Part4">
    737   <front>
    738     <title abbrev="HTTP/1.1">HTTP/1.1, part 4: Conditional Requests</title>
    739  
    740     <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="Roy T. Fielding" role="editor">
    741       <organization abbrev="Day Software">Day Software</organization>
    742       <address>
    743         <email>fielding@gbiv.com</email>
    744       </address>
    745     </author>
    746  
    747     <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="Jim Gettys">
    748       <organization>One Laptop per Child</organization>
    749       <address>
    750         <email>jg@laptop.org</email>
    751       </address>
    752     </author>
    753    
    754     <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="Jeffrey C. Mogul">
    755       <organization abbrev="HP">Hewlett-Packard Company</organization>
    756       <address>
    757         <email>JeffMogul@acm.org</email>
    758       </address>
    759     </author>
    760  
    761     <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="Henrik Frystyk Nielsen">
    762       <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    763       <address>
    764         <email>henrikn@microsoft.com</email>
    765       </address>
    766     </author>
    767  
    768     <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="Larry Masinter">
    769       <organization abbrev="Adobe Systems">Adobe Systems, Incorporated</organization>
    770       <address>
    771         <email>LMM@acm.org</email>
    772       </address>
    773     </author>
    774    
    775     <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach">
    776       <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    777       <address>
    778         <email>paulle@microsoft.com</email>
    779       </address>
    780     </author>
    781      
    782     <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="Tim Berners-Lee">
    783       <organization abbrev="W3C/MIT">World Wide Web Consortium</organization>
    784       <address>
    785         <email>timbl@w3.org</email>
    786       </address>
    787     </author>
    788  
    789     <date month="&ID-MONTH;" year="&ID-YEAR;"/>
    790   </front>
    791   <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-fielding-p4-conditional-&ID-VERSION;"/>
    792   <x:source href="p4-conditional.xml" basename="p4-conditional"/>
     738   <front>
     739      <title abbrev="HTTP/1.1">HTTP/1.1, part 4: Conditional Requests</title>
     740      <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="Roy T. Fielding" role="editor">
     741         <organization abbrev="Day Software">Day Software</organization>
     742         <address><email>fielding@gbiv.com</email></address>
     743      </author>
     744      <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="Jim Gettys">
     745         <organization>One Laptop per Child</organization>
     746         <address><email>jg@laptop.org</email></address>
     747      </author>
     748      <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="Jeffrey C. Mogul">
     749         <organization abbrev="HP">Hewlett-Packard Company</organization>
     750         <address><email>JeffMogul@acm.org</email></address>
     751      </author>
     752      <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="Henrik Frystyk Nielsen">
     753         <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
     754         <address><email>henrikn@microsoft.com</email></address>
     755      </author>
     756      <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="Larry Masinter">
     757         <organization abbrev="Adobe Systems">Adobe Systems, Incorporated</organization>
     758         <address><email>LMM@acm.org</email></address>
     759      </author>
     760      <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach">
     761         <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
     762         <address><email>paulle@microsoft.com</email></address>
     763      </author>
     764      <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="Tim Berners-Lee">
     765         <organization abbrev="W3C/MIT">World Wide Web Consortium</organization>
     766         <address><email>timbl@w3.org</email></address>
     767      </author>
     768      <date month="&ID-MONTH;" year="&ID-YEAR;"/>
     769   </front>
     770   <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-fielding-p4-conditional-&ID-VERSION;"/>
     771   <x:source href="p4-conditional.xml" basename="p4-conditional"/>
     772</reference>
     773
     774<reference anchor="RFC2616">
     775   <front>
     776      <title>Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1</title>
     777      <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="R. Fielding">
     778         <organization>University of California, Irvine</organization>
     779         <address><email>fielding@ics.uci.edu</email></address>
     780      </author>
     781      <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="J. Gettys">
     782         <organization>W3C</organization>
     783         <address><email>jg@w3.org</email></address>
     784      </author>
     785      <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="J. Mogul">
     786         <organization>Compaq Computer Corporation</organization>
     787         <address><email>mogul@wrl.dec.com</email></address>
     788      </author>
     789      <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="H. Frystyk">
     790         <organization>MIT Laboratory for Computer Science</organization>
     791         <address><email>frystyk@w3.org</email></address>
     792      </author>
     793      <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="L. Masinter">
     794         <organization>Xerox Corporation</organization>
     795         <address><email>masinter@parc.xerox.com</email></address>
     796      </author>
     797      <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="P. Leach">
     798         <organization>Microsoft Corporation</organization>
     799         <address><email>paulle@microsoft.com</email></address>
     800      </author>
     801      <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="T. Berners-Lee">
     802         <organization>W3C</organization>
     803         <address><email>timbl@w3.org</email></address>
     804      </author>
     805      <date month="June" year="1999"/>
     806   </front>
     807   <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="2616"/>
    793808</reference>
    794809
     
    825840</reference>
    826841
    827    <reference anchor="RFC2616">
    828      <front>
    829        <title>Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1</title>
    830        <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="R. Fielding">
    831          <organization>University of California, Irvine</organization>
    832          <address><email>fielding@ics.uci.edu</email></address>
    833        </author>
    834        <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="J. Gettys">
    835          <organization>W3C</organization>
    836          <address><email>jg@w3.org</email></address>
    837        </author>
    838        <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="J. Mogul">
    839          <organization>Compaq Computer Corporation</organization>
    840          <address><email>mogul@wrl.dec.com</email></address>
    841        </author>
    842        <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="H. Frystyk">
    843          <organization>MIT Laboratory for Computer Science</organization>
    844          <address><email>frystyk@w3.org</email></address>
    845        </author>
    846        <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="L. Masinter">
    847          <organization>Xerox Corporation</organization>
    848          <address><email>masinter@parc.xerox.com</email></address>
    849        </author>
    850        <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="P. Leach">
    851          <organization>Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    852          <address><email>paulle@microsoft.com</email></address>
    853        </author>
    854        <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="T. Berners-Lee">
    855          <organization>W3C</organization>
    856          <address><email>timbl@w3.org</email></address>
    857        </author>
    858        <date month="June" year="1999"/>
    859      </front>
    860      <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="2616"/>
    861    </reference>
    862 
    863842</references>
    864843
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