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Dec 13, 2007, 8:57:24 PM (12 years ago)
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fielding@…
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Add an editorial note about status and list.
Streamline the new references and place them up front.

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    155155</t>
    156156</abstract>
     157
     158<note title="Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)">
     159  <t>
     160    This version of the HTTP specification contains only minimal editorial
     161    changes from <xref target="RFC2616"/> (abstract, introductory paragraph,
     162    and authors' addresses).  All other changes are due to partitioning the
     163    original into seven mostly independent parts.  The intent is for readers
     164    of future drafts to able to use draft 00 as the basis for comparison
     165    when the WG makes later changes to the specification text.  This draft
     166    will shortly be followed by draft 01 (containing the first round of changes
     167    that have already been agreed to on the mailing list). There is no point in
     168    reviewing this draft other than to verify that the partitioning has been
     169    done correctly.  Roy T. Fielding, Yves Lafon, and Julian Reschke
     170    will be the editors after draft 00 is submitted.
     171  </t>
     172  <t>
     173    Discussion of this draft should take place on the HTTPBIS working group
     174    mailing list (ietf-http-wg@w3.org). The current issues list is
     175    at <eref target="http://www.w3.org/Protocols/HTTP/1.1/rfc2616bis/issues/"/>
     176    and related documents (including fancy diffs) can be found at
     177    <eref target="http://www3.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/"/>.
     178  </t>
     179</note>
    157180</front>
    158181<middle>
     
    804827<back>
    805828<references>
     829   
    806830<reference anchor="Part1">
    807   <front>
    808     <title abbrev="HTTP/1.1">HTTP/1.1, part 1: URIs, Connections, and Message Parsing</title>
    809  
    810     <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="Roy T. Fielding" role="editor">
    811       <organization abbrev="Day Software">Day Software</organization>
    812       <address>
    813         <email>fielding@gbiv.com</email>
    814       </address>
    815     </author>
    816  
    817     <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="Jim Gettys">
    818       <organization>One Laptop per Child</organization>
    819       <address>
    820         <email>jg@laptop.org</email>
    821       </address>
    822     </author>
    823    
    824     <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="Jeffrey C. Mogul">
    825       <organization abbrev="HP">Hewlett-Packard Company</organization>
    826       <address>
    827         <email>JeffMogul@acm.org</email>
    828       </address>
    829     </author>
    830  
    831     <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="Henrik Frystyk Nielsen">
    832       <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    833       <address>
    834         <email>henrikn@microsoft.com</email>
    835       </address>
    836     </author>
    837  
    838     <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="Larry Masinter">
    839       <organization abbrev="Adobe Systems">Adobe Systems, Incorporated</organization>
    840       <address>
    841         <email>LMM@acm.org</email>
    842       </address>
    843     </author>
    844    
    845     <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach">
    846       <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    847       <address>
    848         <email>paulle@microsoft.com</email>
    849       </address>
    850     </author>
    851      
    852     <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="Tim Berners-Lee">
    853       <organization abbrev="W3C/MIT">World Wide Web Consortium</organization>
    854       <address>
    855         <email>timbl@w3.org</email>
    856       </address>
    857     </author>
    858  
    859     <date month="&ID-MONTH;" year="&ID-YEAR;"/>
    860   </front>
    861   <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-fielding-p1-messaging-&ID-VERSION;"/>
    862   <x:source href="p1-messaging.xml" basename="p1-messaging"/>
     831   <front>
     832      <title abbrev="HTTP/1.1">HTTP/1.1, part 1: URIs, Connections, and Message Parsing</title>
     833      <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="Roy T. Fielding" role="editor">
     834         <organization abbrev="Day Software">Day Software</organization>
     835         <address><email>fielding@gbiv.com</email></address>
     836      </author>
     837      <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="Jim Gettys">
     838         <organization>One Laptop per Child</organization>
     839         <address><email>jg@laptop.org</email></address>
     840      </author>
     841      <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="Jeffrey C. Mogul">
     842         <organization abbrev="HP">Hewlett-Packard Company</organization>
     843         <address><email>JeffMogul@acm.org</email></address>
     844      </author>
     845      <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="Henrik Frystyk Nielsen">
     846         <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
     847         <address><email>henrikn@microsoft.com</email></address>
     848      </author>
     849      <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="Larry Masinter">
     850         <organization abbrev="Adobe Systems">Adobe Systems, Incorporated</organization>
     851         <address><email>LMM@acm.org</email></address>
     852      </author>
     853      <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach">
     854         <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
     855         <address><email>paulle@microsoft.com</email></address>
     856      </author>
     857      <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="Tim Berners-Lee">
     858         <organization abbrev="W3C/MIT">World Wide Web Consortium</organization>
     859         <address><email>timbl@w3.org</email></address>
     860      </author>
     861      <date month="&ID-MONTH;" year="&ID-YEAR;"/>
     862   </front>
     863   <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-fielding-p1-messaging-&ID-VERSION;"/>
     864   <x:source href="p1-messaging.xml" basename="p1-messaging"/>
    863865</reference>
    864866
    865867<reference anchor="Part5">
    866   <front>
    867     <title abbrev="HTTP/1.1">HTTP/1.1, part 5: Range Requests and Partial Responses</title>
    868  
    869     <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="Roy T. Fielding" role="editor">
    870       <organization abbrev="Day Software">Day Software</organization>
    871       <address>
    872         <email>fielding@gbiv.com</email>
    873       </address>
    874     </author>
    875  
    876     <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="Jim Gettys">
    877       <organization>One Laptop per Child</organization>
    878       <address>
    879         <email>jg@laptop.org</email>
    880       </address>
    881     </author>
    882    
    883     <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="Jeffrey C. Mogul">
    884       <organization abbrev="HP">Hewlett-Packard Company</organization>
    885       <address>
    886         <email>JeffMogul@acm.org</email>
    887       </address>
    888     </author>
    889  
    890     <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="Henrik Frystyk Nielsen">
    891       <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    892       <address>
    893         <email>henrikn@microsoft.com</email>
    894       </address>
    895     </author>
    896  
    897     <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="Larry Masinter">
    898       <organization abbrev="Adobe Systems">Adobe Systems, Incorporated</organization>
    899       <address>
    900         <email>LMM@acm.org</email>
    901       </address>
    902     </author>
    903    
    904     <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach">
    905       <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    906       <address>
    907         <email>paulle@microsoft.com</email>
    908       </address>
    909     </author>
    910      
    911     <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="Tim Berners-Lee">
    912       <organization abbrev="W3C/MIT">World Wide Web Consortium</organization>
    913       <address>
    914         <email>timbl@w3.org</email>
    915       </address>
    916     </author>
    917  
    918     <date month="&ID-MONTH;" year="&ID-YEAR;"/>
    919   </front>
    920   <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-fielding-p5-range-&ID-VERSION;"/>
    921   <x:source href="p5-range.xml" basename="p5-range"/>
     868   <front>
     869      <title abbrev="HTTP/1.1">HTTP/1.1, part 5: Range Requests and Partial Responses</title>
     870      <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="Roy T. Fielding" role="editor">
     871         <organization abbrev="Day Software">Day Software</organization>
     872         <address><email>fielding@gbiv.com</email></address>
     873      </author>
     874      <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="Jim Gettys">
     875         <organization>One Laptop per Child</organization>
     876         <address><email>jg@laptop.org</email></address>
     877      </author>
     878      <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="Jeffrey C. Mogul">
     879         <organization abbrev="HP">Hewlett-Packard Company</organization>
     880         <address><email>JeffMogul@acm.org</email></address>
     881      </author>
     882      <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="Henrik Frystyk Nielsen">
     883         <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
     884         <address><email>henrikn@microsoft.com</email></address>
     885      </author>
     886      <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="Larry Masinter">
     887         <organization abbrev="Adobe Systems">Adobe Systems, Incorporated</organization>
     888         <address><email>LMM@acm.org</email></address>
     889      </author>
     890      <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach">
     891         <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
     892         <address><email>paulle@microsoft.com</email></address>
     893      </author>
     894      <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="Tim Berners-Lee">
     895         <organization abbrev="W3C/MIT">World Wide Web Consortium</organization>
     896         <address><email>timbl@w3.org</email></address>
     897      </author>
     898      <date month="&ID-MONTH;" year="&ID-YEAR;"/>
     899   </front>
     900   <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-fielding-p5-range-&ID-VERSION;"/>
     901   <x:source href="p5-range.xml" basename="p5-range"/>
    922902</reference>
    923903
    924904<reference anchor="Part6">
    925   <front>
    926     <title abbrev="HTTP/1.1">HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching</title>
    927  
    928     <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="Roy T. Fielding" role="editor">
    929       <organization abbrev="Day Software">Day Software</organization>
    930       <address>
    931         <email>fielding@gbiv.com</email>
    932       </address>
    933     </author>
    934  
    935     <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="Jim Gettys">
    936       <organization>One Laptop per Child</organization>
    937       <address>
    938         <email>jg@laptop.org</email>
    939       </address>
    940     </author>
    941    
    942     <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="Jeffrey C. Mogul">
    943       <organization abbrev="HP">Hewlett-Packard Company</organization>
    944       <address>
    945         <email>JeffMogul@acm.org</email>
    946       </address>
    947     </author>
    948  
    949     <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="Henrik Frystyk Nielsen">
    950       <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    951       <address>
    952         <email>henrikn@microsoft.com</email>
    953       </address>
    954     </author>
    955  
    956     <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="Larry Masinter">
    957       <organization abbrev="Adobe Systems">Adobe Systems, Incorporated</organization>
    958       <address>
    959         <email>LMM@acm.org</email>
    960       </address>
    961     </author>
    962    
    963     <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach">
    964       <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    965       <address>
    966         <email>paulle@microsoft.com</email>
    967       </address>
    968     </author>
    969      
    970     <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="Tim Berners-Lee">
    971       <organization abbrev="W3C/MIT">World Wide Web Consortium</organization>
    972       <address>
    973         <email>timbl@w3.org</email>
    974       </address>
    975     </author>
    976  
    977     <date month="&ID-MONTH;" year="&ID-YEAR;"/>
    978   </front>
    979   <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-fielding-p6-cache-&ID-VERSION;"/>
    980   <x:source href="p6-cache.xml" basename="p6-cache"/>
     905   <front>
     906      <title abbrev="HTTP/1.1">HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching</title>
     907      <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="Roy T. Fielding" role="editor">
     908         <organization abbrev="Day Software">Day Software</organization>
     909         <address><email>fielding@gbiv.com</email></address>
     910      </author>
     911      <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="Jim Gettys">
     912         <organization>One Laptop per Child</organization>
     913         <address><email>jg@laptop.org</email></address>
     914      </author>
     915      <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="Jeffrey C. Mogul">
     916         <organization abbrev="HP">Hewlett-Packard Company</organization>
     917         <address><email>JeffMogul@acm.org</email></address>
     918      </author>
     919      <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="Henrik Frystyk Nielsen">
     920         <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
     921         <address><email>henrikn@microsoft.com</email></address>
     922      </author>
     923      <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="Larry Masinter">
     924         <organization abbrev="Adobe Systems">Adobe Systems, Incorporated</organization>
     925         <address><email>LMM@acm.org</email></address>
     926      </author>
     927      <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach">
     928         <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft Corporation</organization>
     929         <address><email>paulle@microsoft.com</email></address>
     930      </author>
     931      <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="Tim Berners-Lee">
     932         <organization abbrev="W3C/MIT">World Wide Web Consortium</organization>
     933         <address><email>timbl@w3.org</email></address>
     934      </author>
     935      <date month="&ID-MONTH;" year="&ID-YEAR;"/>
     936   </front>
     937   <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-fielding-p6-cache-&ID-VERSION;"/>
     938   <x:source href="p6-cache.xml" basename="p6-cache"/>
    981939</reference>
    982940
    983 
    984    <reference anchor="RFC2616">
    985      <front>
    986        <title>Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1</title>
    987        <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="R. Fielding">
     941<reference anchor="RFC2616">
     942   <front>
     943      <title>Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1</title>
     944      <author initials="R." surname="Fielding" fullname="R. Fielding">
    988945         <organization>University of California, Irvine</organization>
    989946         <address><email>fielding@ics.uci.edu</email></address>
    990        </author>
    991        <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="J. Gettys">
     947      </author>
     948      <author initials="J." surname="Gettys" fullname="J. Gettys">
    992949         <organization>W3C</organization>
    993950         <address><email>jg@w3.org</email></address>
    994        </author>
    995        <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="J. Mogul">
     951      </author>
     952      <author initials="J." surname="Mogul" fullname="J. Mogul">
    996953         <organization>Compaq Computer Corporation</organization>
    997954         <address><email>mogul@wrl.dec.com</email></address>
    998        </author>
    999        <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="H. Frystyk">
     955      </author>
     956      <author initials="H." surname="Frystyk" fullname="H. Frystyk">
    1000957         <organization>MIT Laboratory for Computer Science</organization>
    1001958         <address><email>frystyk@w3.org</email></address>
    1002        </author>
    1003        <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="L. Masinter">
     959      </author>
     960      <author initials="L." surname="Masinter" fullname="L. Masinter">
    1004961         <organization>Xerox Corporation</organization>
    1005962         <address><email>masinter@parc.xerox.com</email></address>
    1006        </author>
    1007        <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="P. Leach">
     963      </author>
     964      <author initials="P." surname="Leach" fullname="P. Leach">
    1008965         <organization>Microsoft Corporation</organization>
    1009966         <address><email>paulle@microsoft.com</email></address>
    1010        </author>
    1011        <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="T. Berners-Lee">
     967      </author>
     968      <author initials="T." surname="Berners-Lee" fullname="T. Berners-Lee">
    1012969         <organization>W3C</organization>
    1013970         <address><email>timbl@w3.org</email></address>
    1014        </author>
    1015        <date month="June" year="1999"/>
    1016      </front>
    1017      <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="2616"/>
    1018    </reference>
     971      </author>
     972      <date month="June" year="1999"/>
     973   </front>
     974   <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="2616"/>
     975</reference>
     976
    1019977</references>
    1020978</back>
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