Changeset 2681


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May 19, 2014, 5:22:15 AM (6 years ago)
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minor editorial changes (#553)

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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/auth48/p4-conditional.unpg.txt

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    11771177   <http://www.iana.org/assignments/message-headers/>.
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    1179    This document defines the following HTTP header fields, so the
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    1181    accordingly (see [BCP90]).
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    12181218   and users of known security concerns specific to the HTTP conditional
    12191219   request mechanisms.  More general security considerations are
    1220    addressed in HTTP messaging [RFC7230] and semantics [RFC7231].
     1220   addressed in HTTP "Message Syntax and Routing" [RFC7230] and
     1221   "Semantics and Content" [RFC7231].
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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/auth48/rfc7232.abdiff.txt

    r2677 r2681  
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    8888    time.  It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference
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    308     This document defines the following HTTP header fields, so the
    309     "Permanent Message Header Field Names" registry has been updated
    310     accordingly (see [BCP90]).
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    312 NEW:
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    314     This document defines the following HTTP header fields, so their
    315     associated registry entries have been updated according to the
    316     permanent registrations below (see [BCP90]):
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    319305Section 8., paragraph 1:
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    323309    and users of known security concerns specific to the HTTP conditional
    324310    request mechanisms.  More general security considerations are
    325     addressed in HTTP messaging [RFC7230] and semantics [RFC7231].
     311    addressed in HTTP "Message Syntax and Routing" [RFC7230] and
     312    "Semantics and Content" [RFC7231].
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    4343      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">Obsoletes: 2616 <span class="delete">(if approved)</span>                            J. Reschke, Ed.</td><td> </td><td class="rblock">Obsoletes: 2616                                          J. Reschke, Ed.</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    4444      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock"><span class="delete">Intended status:</span> Standards Track                              greenbytes</td><td> </td><td class="rblock"><span class="insert">Category:</span> Standards Track                                     greenbytes</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    45       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock"><span class="delete">Expires: November 16, 2014</span>                                  May <span class="delete">15,</span> 2014</td><td> </td><td class="rblock"><span class="insert">ISSN: 2070-1721</span>                                                 May 2014</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
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    4747      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">      Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Conditional Requests</td><td> </td><td class="right">      Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Conditional Requests</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     
    9292      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock"><span class="delete">   time.  It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   <span class="insert">http://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7232.</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    9393      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock"><span class="delete">   material or to cite them other than as "work in progress."</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    94       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock"><span class="delete">   This Internet-Draft will expire on November 16, 2014.</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
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    302302      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   &lt;http://www.iana.org/assignments/message-headers/&gt;.</td><td> </td><td class="right">   &lt;http://www.iana.org/assignments/message-headers/&gt;.</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
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    304       <tr><td><a name="diff0018" /></td></tr>
    305       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   This document defines the following HTTP header fields, so <span class="delete">the</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   This document defines the following HTTP header fields, so <span class="insert">their</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    306       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock"><span class="delete">   "Permanent Message Header Field Names"</span> registry <span class="delete">has</span> been updated</td><td> </td><td class="rblock"><span class="insert">   associated</span> registry <span class="insert">entries have</span> been updated <span class="insert">according to the</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    307       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   <span class="delete">accordingly</span> (see <span class="delete">[BCP90]).</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock"><span class="insert">   permanent registrations below</span> (see <span class="insert">[BCP90]):</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     304      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   This document defines the following HTTP header fields, so their</td><td> </td><td class="right">   This document defines the following HTTP header fields, so their</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     305      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   associated registry entries have been updated according to the</td><td> </td><td class="right">   associated registry entries have been updated according to the</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     306      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   permanent registrations below (see [BCP90]):</td><td> </td><td class="right">   permanent registrations below (see [BCP90]):</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
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    312311      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   | ETag                | http     | standard | Section 2.3 |</td><td> </td><td class="right">   | ETag                | http     | standard | Section 2.3 |</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    313       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   | If-Match            | http     | standard | Section 3.1 |</td><td> </td><td class="right">   | If-Match            | http     | standard | Section 3.1 |</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    314       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   | If-Modified-Since   | http     | standard | Section 3.3 |</td><td> </td><td class="right">   | If-Modified-Since   | http     | standard | Section 3.3 |</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    315       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   | If-None-Match       | http     | standard | Section 3.2 |</td><td> </td><td class="right">   | If-None-Match       | http     | standard | Section 3.2 |</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    316       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   | If-Unmodified-Since | http     | standard | Section 3.4 |</td><td> </td><td class="right">   | If-Unmodified-Since | http     | standard | Section 3.4 |</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    317       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   | Last-Modified       | http     | standard | Section 2.2 |</td><td> </td><td class="right">   | Last-Modified       | http     | standard | Section 2.2 |</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
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    326322      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   and users of known security concerns specific to the HTTP conditional</td><td> </td><td class="right">   and users of known security concerns specific to the HTTP conditional</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    327323      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   request mechanisms.  More general security considerations are</td><td> </td><td class="right">   request mechanisms.  More general security considerations are</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    328       <tr><td><a name="diff0019" /></td></tr>
    329       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   addressed in HTTP messaging [RFC7230] and semantics <span class="delete">[RFC7231].</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   addressed in <span class="insert">the</span> HTTP messaging [RFC7230] and semantics <span class="insert">[RFC7231]</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    330       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock"></td><td> </td><td class="rblock"><span class="insert">   documents.</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
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     325      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   addressed in HTTP <span class="delete">"Message Syntax and Routing"</span> [RFC7230] and</td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   addressed in <span class="insert">the</span> HTTP <span class="insert">messaging</span> [RFC7230] and <span class="insert">semantics [RFC7231]</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     326      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   <span class="delete">"Semantics and Content" [RFC7231].</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock"><span class="insert">   documents.</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
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    332328      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   The validators defined by this specification are not intended to</td><td> </td><td class="right">   The validators defined by this specification are not intended to</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     
    340336      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   An entity-tag can be abused in ways that create privacy risks.  For</td><td> </td><td class="right">   An entity-tag can be abused in ways that create privacy risks.  For</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
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    343339      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">10.1.  Normative References</td><td> </td><td class="right">10.1.  Normative References</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    344340      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     
    351347      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   [RFC7230]  Fielding, R., Ed. and J. Reschke, Ed., "Hypertext Transfer</td><td> </td><td class="right">   [RFC7230]  Fielding, R., Ed. and J. Reschke, Ed., "Hypertext Transfer</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    352348      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">              Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing",</td><td> </td><td class="right">              Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing",</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    353       <tr><td><a name="diff0020" /></td></tr>
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    354350      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">              <span class="delete">draft-ietf-httpbis-p1-messaging-latest (work in progress),</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">              <span class="insert">RFC 7230,</span> May 2014.</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    355351      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">              May 2014.</td><td> </td><td class="rblock"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    356352      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    357353      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   [RFC7231]  Fielding, R., Ed. and J. Reschke, Ed., "Hypertext Transfer</td><td> </td><td class="right">   [RFC7231]  Fielding, R., Ed. and J. Reschke, Ed., "Hypertext Transfer</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    358       <tr><td><a name="diff0021" /></td></tr>
     354      <tr><td><a name="diff0020" /></td></tr>
    359355      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">              Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content",</td><td> </td><td class="rblock">              Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content", <span class="insert">RFC 7231,</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    360356      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">              <span class="delete">draft-ietf-httpbis-p2-semantics-latest (work in progress),</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     
    363359      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   [RFC7233]  Fielding, R., Ed., Lafon, Y., Ed., and J. Reschke, Ed.,</td><td> </td><td class="right">   [RFC7233]  Fielding, R., Ed., Lafon, Y., Ed., and J. Reschke, Ed.,</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    364360      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">              "Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Range Requests",</td><td> </td><td class="right">              "Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Range Requests",</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    365       <tr><td><a name="diff0022" /></td></tr>
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    366362      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">              <span class="delete">draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-latest (work in progress),</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">              <span class="insert">RFC 7233,</span> May 2014.</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    367363      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">              May 2014.</td><td> </td><td class="rblock"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     
    369365      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   [RFC7234]  Fielding, R., Ed., Nottingham, M., Ed., and J. Reschke,</td><td> </td><td class="right">   [RFC7234]  Fielding, R., Ed., Nottingham, M., Ed., and J. Reschke,</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    370366      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">              Ed., "Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Caching",</td><td> </td><td class="right">              Ed., "Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Caching",</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    371       <tr><td><a name="diff0023" /></td></tr>
     367      <tr><td><a name="diff0022" /></td></tr>
    372368      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">              <span class="delete">draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-latest (work in progress),</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">              <span class="insert">RFC 7234,</span> May 2014.</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    373369      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">              May 2014.</td><td> </td><td class="rblock"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     
    388384      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">Appendix A.  Changes from RFC 2616</td><td> </td><td class="right">Appendix A.  Changes from RFC 2616</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    389385      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    390       <tr><td><a name="diff0024" /></td></tr>
     386      <tr><td><a name="diff0023" /></td></tr>
    391387      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   The definition of validator weakness has been expanded and <span class="delete">clarified.</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   The definition of validator weakness has been expanded and <span class="insert">clarified</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    392388      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   (Section <span class="delete">2.1)</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   (Section <span class="insert">2.1).</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    393389      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    394390      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   Weak entity-tags are now allowed in all requests except range</td><td> </td><td class="right">   Weak entity-tags are now allowed in all requests except range</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    395       <tr><td><a name="diff0025" /></td></tr>
     391      <tr><td><a name="diff0024" /></td></tr>
    396392      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   requests.  (Sections 2.1 and <span class="delete">3.2)</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   requests.  (Sections 2.1 and <span class="insert">3.2.)</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    397393      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock"></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">                                                                         </td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    398394      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   The ETag header field ABNF has been changed to not use quoted-string,</td><td> </td><td class="right">   The ETag header field ABNF has been changed to not use quoted-string,</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    399       <tr><td><a name="diff0026" /></td></tr>
     395      <tr><td><a name="diff0025" /></td></tr>
    400396      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   thus avoiding escaping issues<span class="delete">.  (Section 2.3)</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   thus avoiding escaping issues<span class="insert"> (Section 2.3).</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    401397      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    402398      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   ETag is defined to provide an entity tag for the selected</td><td> </td><td class="right">   ETag is defined to provide an entity tag for the selected</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    403399      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   representation, thereby clarifying what it applies to in various</td><td> </td><td class="right">   representation, thereby clarifying what it applies to in various</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     400      <tr><td><a name="diff0026" /></td></tr>
     401      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   situations (such as a PUT response)<span class="delete">.  (Section 2.3)</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   situations (such as a PUT response)<span class="insert"> (Section 2.3).</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     402      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     403      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   The precedence for evaluation of conditional requests has been</td><td> </td><td class="right">   The precedence for evaluation of conditional requests has been</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    404404      <tr><td><a name="diff0027" /></td></tr>
    405       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   situations (such as a PUT response)<span class="delete">.  (Section 2.3)</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   situations (such as a PUT response)<span class="insert"> (Section 2.3).</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    406       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    407       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   The precedence for evaluation of conditional requests has been</td><td> </td><td class="right">   The precedence for evaluation of conditional requests has been</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    408       <tr><td><a name="diff0028" /></td></tr>
    409405      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   defined<span class="delete">.  (Section 6)</span></td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   defined<span class="insert"> (Section 6).</span></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    410406      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     
    420416      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   The rules below are defined in [RFC7230]:</td><td> </td><td class="right">   The rules below are defined in [RFC7230]:</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    421417      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    422       <tr><td><a name="diff0029" /></td></tr>
     418      <tr><td><a name="diff0028" /></td></tr>
    423419      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">     OWS           = &lt;OWS, <span class="delete">see</span> [RFC7230], Section 3.2.3&gt;</td><td> </td><td class="rblock">     OWS           = &lt;OWS, <span class="insert">defined in</span> [RFC7230], Section 3.2.3&gt;</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    424420      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">     obs-text      = &lt;obs-text, <span class="delete">see</span> [RFC7230], Section 3.2.6&gt;</td><td> </td><td class="rblock">     obs-text      = &lt;obs-text, <span class="insert">defined in</span> [RFC7230], Section 3.2.6&gt;</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    425421      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     422      <tr><td><a name="diff0029" /></td></tr>
     423      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   The rule<span class="delete">s below are defined in other parts</span>:</td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   The rule<span class="insert"> below is defined in [RFC7231]</span>:</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     424      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    426425      <tr><td><a name="diff0030" /></td></tr>
    427       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   The rule<span class="delete">s below are defined in other parts</span>:</td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   The rule<span class="insert"> below is defined in [RFC7231]</span>:</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    428       <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    429       <tr><td><a name="diff0031" /></td></tr>
    430426      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">     HTTP-date     = &lt;HTTP-date, <span class="delete">see</span> [RFC7231], Section 7.1.1.1&gt;</td><td> </td><td class="rblock">     HTTP-date     = &lt;HTTP-date, <span class="insert">defined in</span> [RFC7231], Section 7.1.1.1&gt;</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    431427      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     
    437433      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   ETag = entity-tag</td><td> </td><td class="right">   ETag = entity-tag</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    438434      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    439       <tr><td><a name="diff0032" /></td></tr>
     435      <tr><td><a name="diff0031" /></td></tr>
    440436      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   HTTP-date = &lt;HTTP-date, <span class="delete">see</span> [RFC7231], Section 7.1.1.1&gt;</td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   HTTP-date = &lt;HTTP-date, <span class="insert">defined in</span> [RFC7231], Section 7.1.1.1&gt;</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    441437      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     
    449445      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   Last-Modified = HTTP-date</td><td> </td><td class="right">   Last-Modified = HTTP-date</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    450446      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
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     447      <tr><td><a name="diff0032" /></td></tr>
    452448      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   OWS = &lt;OWS, <span class="delete">see</span> [RFC7230], Section 3.2.3&gt;</td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   OWS = &lt;OWS, <span class="insert">defined in</span> [RFC7230], Section 3.2.3&gt;</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    453449      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left"></td><td> </td><td class="right"></td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     
    456452      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">    / obs-text</td><td> </td><td class="right">    / obs-text</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
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     454      <tr><td><a name="diff0033" /></td></tr>
    459455      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="lblock">   obs-text = &lt;obs-text, <span class="delete">see</span> [RFC7230], Section 3.2.6&gt;</td><td> </td><td class="rblock">   obs-text = &lt;obs-text, <span class="insert">defined in</span> [RFC7230], Section 3.2.6&gt;</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
    460456      <tr><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td><td class="left">   opaque-tag = DQUOTE *etagc DQUOTE</td><td> </td><td class="right">   opaque-tag = DQUOTE *etagc DQUOTE</td><td class="lineno" valign="top"></td></tr>
     
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    465        content: "Expires November 15, 2014";
     465       content: "Expires November 20, 2014";
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    506506      <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
    507507      <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-latest">
    508       <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2014-05-14">
     508      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2014-05-19">
    509509      <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
    510510      <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is a stateless application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. This document defines HTTP/1.1 conditional requests, including metadata header fields for indicating state changes, request header fields for making preconditions on such state, and rules for constructing the responses to a conditional request when one or more preconditions evaluate to false.">
     
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    534                <td class="left">Expires: November 15, 2014</td>
    535                <td class="right">May 14, 2014</td>
     534               <td class="left">Expires: November 20, 2014</td>
     535               <td class="right">May 19, 2014</td>
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    561561            in progress”.
    562562         </p>
    563          <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on November 15, 2014.</p>
     563         <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on November 20, 2014.</p>
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    12481248            <p id="rfc.section.7.2.p.1">HTTP header fields are registered within the "Message Headers" registry maintained at &lt;<a href="http://www.iana.org/assignments/message-headers/">http://www.iana.org/assignments/message-headers/</a>&gt;.
    12491249            </p>
    1250             <p id="rfc.section.7.2.p.2">This document defines the following HTTP header fields, so the "Permanent Message Header Field Names" registry has been updated
    1251                accordingly (see <a href="#BCP90" id="rfc.xref.BCP90.1"><cite title="Registration Procedures for Message Header Fields">[BCP90]</cite></a>).
     1250            <p id="rfc.section.7.2.p.2">This document defines the following HTTP header fields, so their associated registry entries have been updated according to
     1251               the permanent registrations below (see <a href="#BCP90" id="rfc.xref.BCP90.1"><cite title="Registration Procedures for Message Header Fields">[BCP90]</cite></a>):
    12521252            </p>
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    13141314         <h1 id="rfc.section.8"><a href="#rfc.section.8">8.</a>&nbsp;<a href="#security.considerations">Security Considerations</a></h1>
    13151315         <p id="rfc.section.8.p.1">This section is meant to inform developers, information providers, and users of known security concerns specific to the HTTP
    1316             conditional request mechanisms. More general security considerations are addressed in HTTP messaging <a href="#RFC7230" id="rfc.xref.RFC7230.5"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[RFC7230]</cite></a> and semantics <a href="#RFC7231" id="rfc.xref.RFC7231.6"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[RFC7231]</cite></a>.
     1316            conditional request mechanisms. More general security considerations are addressed in HTTP "Message Syntax and Routing" <a href="#RFC7230" id="rfc.xref.RFC7230.5"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[RFC7230]</cite></a> and "Semantics and Content" <a href="#RFC7231" id="rfc.xref.RFC7231.6"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[RFC7231]</cite></a>.
    13171317         </p>
    13181318         <p id="rfc.section.8.p.2">The validators defined by this specification are not intended to ensure the validity of a representation, guard against malicious
  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml

    r2675 r2681  
    11731173</t>
    11741174<t>
    1175    This document defines the following HTTP header fields, so the
    1176    "Permanent Message Header Field Names" registry has been updated
    1177    accordingly (see <xref target="BCP90"/>).
     1175   This document defines the following HTTP header fields, so their
     1176   associated registry entries have been updated according to the
     1177   permanent registrations below (see <xref target="BCP90"/>):
    11781178</t>
    11791179<?BEGININC p4-conditional.iana-headers ?>
     
    12351235   users of known security concerns specific to the HTTP conditional
    12361236   request mechanisms. More general security considerations are addressed
    1237    in HTTP messaging &messaging; and semantics &semantics;.
     1237   in HTTP "Message Syntax and Routing" &messaging; and "Semantics and Content"
     1238   &semantics;.
    12381239</t>
    12391240<t>
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