Changeset 2518

Timestamp:

20/12/13 21:22:55 (8 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

(editorial) fix odd phrasing in [2502]

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p4-conditional.html (modified) (5 diffs)
• p4-conditional.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

@@ -448 +448 @@
   }
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires June 16, 2014";
+       content: "Expires June 23, 2014";
   }
   @bottom-right {
@@ -491 +491 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2013-12-13">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2013-12-20">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. This document defines HTTP/1.1 conditional requests, including metadata header fields for indicating state changes, request header fields for making preconditions on such state, and rules for constructing the responses to a conditional request when one or more preconditions evaluate to false.">
@@ -517 +517 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: June 16, 2014</td>
-               <td class="right">December 13, 2013</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: June 23, 2014</td>
+               <td class="right">December 20, 2013</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -546 +546 @@
             in progress”.
          </p>
-         <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on June 16, 2014.</p>
+         <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on June 23, 2014.</p>
       </div>
       <div id="rfc.copyrightnotice">
@@ -826 +826 @@
                <p id="rfc.section.2.3.1.p.2">For example, a resource that has implementation-specific versioning applied to all changes might use an internal revision
                   number, perhaps combined with a variance identifier for content negotiation, to accurately differentiate between representations.
-                  Other implementations might use a collision-resistant hash of representation content, a combination of various files system
-                  attributes, or a modification timestamp that has sub-second resolution.
+                  Other implementations might use a collision-resistant hash of representation content, a combination of various file attributes,
+                  or a modification timestamp that has sub-second resolution.
                </p>
                <p id="rfc.section.2.3.1.p.3">An origin server <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> send ETag for any selected representation for which detection of changes can be reasonably and consistently determined, since

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml

@@ -477 +477 @@
    accurately differentiate between representations.
    Other implementations might use a collision-resistant hash of
-   representation content, a combination of various files system attributes, or
+   representation content, a combination of various file attributes, or
    a modification timestamp that has sub-second resolution.
 </t>