Changeset 2458

Timestamp:

Oct 31, 2013, 8:32:46 AM (6 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

turn a redundant use of RFC2119 keywords into prose (see #502)

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p1-messaging.html (modified) (1 diff)
• p1-messaging.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

@@ -1028 +1028 @@
                ignored by recipients that do not recognize them. Header field extensibility is discussed in <a href="#field.extensibility" title="Field Extensibility">Section&nbsp;3.2.1</a>.
             </p>
-            <p id="rfc.section.2.6.p.8">Intermediaries that process HTTP messages (i.e., all intermediaries other than those acting as tunnels) <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> send their own HTTP-version in forwarded messages. In other words, they <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> blindly forward the first line of an HTTP message without ensuring that the protocol version in that message matches a version
-               to which that intermediary is conformant for both the receiving and sending of messages. Forwarding an HTTP message without
-               rewriting the HTTP-version might result in communication errors when downstream recipients use the message sender's version
-               to determine what features are safe to use for later communication with that sender.
+            <p id="rfc.section.2.6.p.8">Intermediaries that process HTTP messages (i.e., all intermediaries other than those acting as tunnels) <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> send their own HTTP-version in forwarded messages. In other words, they are not allowed to blindly forward the first line
+               of an HTTP message without ensuring that the protocol version in that message matches a version to which that intermediary
+               is conformant for both the receiving and sending of messages. Forwarding an HTTP message without rewriting the HTTP-version
+               might result in communication errors when downstream recipients use the message sender's version to determine what features
+               are safe to use for later communication with that sender.
             </p>
             <p id="rfc.section.2.6.p.9">A client <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> send a request version equal to the highest version to which the client is conformant and whose major version is no higher

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

@@ -739 +739 @@
    Intermediaries that process HTTP messages (i.e., all intermediaries
    other than those acting as tunnels) &MUST; send their own HTTP-version
-   in forwarded messages.  In other words, they &MUST-NOT; blindly
+   in forwarded messages.  In other words, they are not allowed to blindly
    forward the first line of an HTTP message without ensuring that the
    protocol version in that message matches a version to which that