Changeset 2324

Timestamp:

Jul 29, 2013, 1:08:01 PM (6 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

Fix a missing comma and clarify that Vary in a response is about this response; updates [2294] which addresses #488

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p2-semantics.html (modified) (1 diff)
• p2-semantics.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.html

@@ -3053 +3053 @@
       <div id="rfc.iref.v.1"></div>
       <h3 id="rfc.section.7.1.4"><a href="#rfc.section.7.1.4">7.1.4</a>&nbsp;<a id="header.vary" href="#header.vary">Vary</a></h3>
-      <p id="rfc.section.7.1.4.p.1">The "Vary" header field describes what parts of a request message, aside from the method, the Host header field and the request
-         target, might influence the origin server's process for selecting and representing the response. The value consists of either
-         a single asterisk ("*") or a list of header field names (case-insensitive).
+      <p id="rfc.section.7.1.4.p.1">The "Vary" header field in a response describes what parts of a request message, aside from the method, Host header field,
+         and request target, might influence the origin server's process for selecting and representing this response. The value consists
+         of either a single asterisk ("*") or a list of header field names (case-insensitive).
       </p>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.57"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.59"></span>  <a href="#header.vary" class="smpl">Vary</a> = "*" / 1#<a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">field-name</a>

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.xml

@@ -3989 +3989 @@
    <x:anchor-alias value="Vary"/>
 <t>
-   The "Vary" header field describes what parts of a request message, aside
-   from the method, the Host header field and the request target, might
-   influence the origin server's process for selecting and representing the
-   response. The value consists of either a single asterisk ("*") or a list of
-   header field names (case-insensitive).
+   The "Vary" header field in a response describes what parts of a request
+   message, aside from the method, Host header field, and request target,
+   might influence the origin server's process for selecting and representing
+   this response. The value consists of either a single asterisk ("*") or a
+   list of header field names (case-insensitive).
 </t>
 <figure><artwork type="abnf2616"><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="Vary"/>