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Timestamp:
20/06/13 18:37:01 (7 years ago)
Author:
julian.reschke@…
Message:

rephrase "...leading toward a 200..." (see #462)

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draft-ietf-httpbis/latest
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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.html

    r2297 r2299  
    755755         stored in reverse order and the user agent wishes to transfer one page at a time.
    756756      </p>
    757       <p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.7">The Range header field is evaluated after evaluating the preconditions of <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.1"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a> and only if the result of their evaluation is leading toward a <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> response. In other words, Range is ignored when a conditional GET would result in a <a href="p4-conditional.html#status.304" class="smpl">304 (Not Modified)</a> response.
     757      <p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.7">The Range header field is evaluated after evaluating the precondition header fields defined in <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.1"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>, and only if the result in absence of the Range header field would be a <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> response. In other words, Range is ignored when a conditional GET would result in a <a href="p4-conditional.html#status.304" class="smpl">304 (Not Modified)</a> response.
    758758      </p>
    759759      <p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.8">The If-Range header field (<a href="#header.if-range" id="rfc.xref.header.if-range.1" title="If-Range">Section&nbsp;3.2</a>) can be used as a precondition to applying the Range header field.
     
    13501350         </li>
    13511351         <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/485">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/485</a>&gt;: "MUSTs and other feedback"
    1352          </li>
    1353       </ul>
    1354       <p id="rfc.section.E.4.p.2">Partly resolved issues: </p>
    1355       <ul>
    1356          <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462</a>&gt;: "Editorial suggestions"
    13571352         </li>
    13581353      </ul>
  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

    r2297 r2299  
    416416</t>
    417417<t>
    418    The Range header field is evaluated after evaluating the preconditions of
    419    <xref target="Part4"/> and only if the result of their evaluation is
    420    leading toward a <x:ref>200 (OK)</x:ref> response. In other words, Range
    421    is ignored when a conditional GET would result in a
     418   The Range header field is evaluated after evaluating the precondition header
     419   fields defined in <xref target="Part4"/>, and only if the result in absence
     420   of the Range header field would be a <x:ref>200 (OK)</x:ref> response. In
     421   other words, Range is ignored when a conditional GET would result in a
    422422   <x:ref>304 (Not Modified)</x:ref> response.
    423423</t>
     
    15811581  </list>
    15821582</t>
    1583 <t>
    1584   Partly resolved issues:
    1585   <list style="symbols">
    1586     <t>
    1587       <eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462"/>:
    1588       "Editorial suggestions"
    1589     </t>
    1590   </list>
    1591 </t>
    15921583</section>
    15931584</section>
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