Changeset 2299

Timestamp:

20/06/13 18:37:01 (9 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

rephrase "...leading toward a 200..." (see #462)

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p5-range.html (modified) (2 diffs)
• p5-range.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.html

@@ -755 +755 @@
          stored in reverse order and the user agent wishes to transfer one page at a time.
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.7">The Range header field is evaluated after evaluating the preconditions of <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.1"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a> and only if the result of their evaluation is leading toward a <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> response. In other words, Range is ignored when a conditional GET would result in a <a href="p4-conditional.html#status.304" class="smpl">304 (Not Modified)</a> response.
+      <p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.7">The Range header field is evaluated after evaluating the precondition header fields defined in <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.1"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>, and only if the result in absence of the Range header field would be a <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> response. In other words, Range is ignored when a conditional GET would result in a <a href="p4-conditional.html#status.304" class="smpl">304 (Not Modified)</a> response.
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.8">The If-Range header field (<a href="#header.if-range" id="rfc.xref.header.if-range.1" title="If-Range">Section&nbsp;3.2</a>) can be used as a precondition to applying the Range header field.
@@ -1350 +1350 @@
          </li>
          <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/485">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/485</a>&gt;: "MUSTs and other feedback"
-         </li>
-      </ul>
-      <p id="rfc.section.E.4.p.2">Partly resolved issues: </p>
-      <ul>
-         <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462</a>&gt;: "Editorial suggestions"
          </li>
       </ul>

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

@@ -416 +416 @@
 </t>
 <t>
-   The Range header field is evaluated after evaluating the preconditions of
-   <xref target="Part4"/> and only if the result of their evaluation is
-   leading toward a <x:ref>200 (OK)</x:ref> response. In other words, Range
-   is ignored when a conditional GET would result in a
+   The Range header field is evaluated after evaluating the precondition header
+   fields defined in <xref target="Part4"/>, and only if the result in absence
+   of the Range header field would be a <x:ref>200 (OK)</x:ref> response. In
+   other words, Range is ignored when a conditional GET would result in a
    <x:ref>304 (Not Modified)</x:ref> response.
 </t>
@@ -1581 +1581 @@
   </list>
 </t>
-<t>
-  Partly resolved issues:
-  <list style="symbols">
-    <t>
-      <eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462"/>:
-      "Editorial suggestions"
-    </t>
-  </list>
-</t>
 </section>
 </section>