Changeset 2297 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Timestamp:

20/06/13 16:41:11 (8 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

adjust language describing why a server would not return 416, also s/record/process/ because we never say what "record" means (see #462)

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p5-range.html (modified) (2 diffs)
• p5-range.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.html

@@ -918 +918 @@
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.4.3.p.5">The combined response message body consists of the union of partial content ranges in the new response and each of the selected
-         responses. If the union consists of the entire range of the representation, then the client <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> record the combined response as if it were a complete <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> response, including a <a href="p1-messaging.html#header.content-length" class="smpl">Content-Length</a> header field that reflects the complete length. Otherwise, the client <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> record the set of continuous ranges as one of the following: an incomplete <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> response if the combined response is a prefix of the representation, a single <a href="#status.206" class="smpl">206 (Partial Content)</a> response containing a multipart/byteranges body, or multiple <a href="#status.206" class="smpl">206 (Partial Content)</a> responses, each with one continuous range that is indicated by a <a href="#header.content-range" class="smpl">Content-Range</a> header field.
+         responses. If the union consists of the entire range of the representation, then the client <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> process the combined response as if it were a complete <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> response, including a <a href="p1-messaging.html#header.content-length" class="smpl">Content-Length</a> header field that reflects the complete length. Otherwise, the client <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> process the set of continuous ranges as one of the following: an incomplete <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> response if the combined response is a prefix of the representation, a single <a href="#status.206" class="smpl">206 (Partial Content)</a> response containing a multipart/byteranges body, or multiple <a href="#status.206" class="smpl">206 (Partial Content)</a> responses, each with one continuous range that is indicated by a <a href="#header.content-range" class="smpl">Content-Range</a> header field.
       </p>
       <div id="rfc.iref.29"></div>
@@ -933 +933 @@
 Content-Range: bytes */47022
 </pre><div class="note" id="rfc.section.4.4.p.4"> 
-         <p> <b>Note:</b> Because servers are free to ignore <a href="#header.range" class="smpl">Range</a>, many implementations will simply respond with the entire selected representation in a <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> response if the requested ranges are invalid or not satisfiable. That is partly because most clients are prepared to receive
-            a <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> to complete the task (albeit less efficiently) and partly because clients might not stop making an invalid partial request
+         <p> <b>Note:</b> Because servers are free to ignore <a href="#header.range" class="smpl">Range</a>, many implementations will simply respond with the entire selected representation in a <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> response. That is partly because most clients are prepared to receive a <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.200" class="smpl">200 (OK)</a> to complete the task (albeit less efficiently) and partly because clients might not stop making an invalid partial request
             until they have received a complete representation. Thus, clients cannot depend on receiving a <a href="#status.416" class="smpl">416 (Range Not Satisfiable)</a> response even when it is most appropriate.
          </p> 

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

@@ -781 +781 @@
    content ranges in the new response and each of the selected responses.
    If the union consists of the entire range of the representation, then the
-   client &MUST; record the combined response as if it were a complete
+   client &MUST; process the combined response as if it were a complete
    <x:ref>200 (OK)</x:ref> response, including a <x:ref>Content-Length</x:ref>
    header field that reflects the complete length.
-   Otherwise, the client &MUST; record the set of continuous ranges as one of
+   Otherwise, the client &MUST; process the set of continuous ranges as one of
    the following:
    an incomplete <x:ref>200 (OK)</x:ref> response if the combined response is
@@ -826 +826 @@
     &Note; Because servers are free to ignore <x:ref>Range</x:ref>, many
     implementations will simply respond with the entire selected representation
-    in a <x:ref>200 (OK)</x:ref> response if the
-    requested ranges are invalid or not satisfiable. That is partly because
+    in a <x:ref>200 (OK)</x:ref> response. That is partly because
     most clients are prepared to receive a <x:ref>200 (OK)</x:ref> to
     complete the task (albeit less efficiently) and partly because clients