Changeset 2296 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Timestamp:

20/06/13 15:24:50 (7 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

s/operation/request/, also get rid of a useless "MAY" (see #462)

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p5-range.html (modified) (7 diffs)
• p5-range.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.html

@@ -449 +449 @@
   }
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires December 14, 2013";
+       content: "Expires December 22, 2013";
   }
   @bottom-right {
@@ -492 +492 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2013-06-12">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2013-06-20">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. This document defines range requests and the rules for constructing and combining responses to those requests.">
@@ -518 +518 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: December 14, 2013</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: December 22, 2013</td>
                <td class="right">J. Reschke, Editor</td>
             </tr>
@@ -527 +527 @@
             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">June 12, 2013</td>
+               <td class="right">June 20, 2013</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -552 +552 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on December 14, 2013.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on December 22, 2013.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2013 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -662 +662 @@
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.2"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.4"></span>  <a href="#byte.ranges" class="smpl">bytes-unit</a>       = "bytes"
 </pre><div id="rule.ranges-specifier">
-         <p id="rfc.section.2.1.p.3">                A byte range operation <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> specify a single range of bytes, or a set of ranges within a single representation.
-         </p>
+         <p id="rfc.section.2.1.p.3">                A byte range request can specify a single range of bytes, or a set of ranges within a single representation.</p>
       </div>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.3"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.5"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.6"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.7"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.8"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.9"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.10"></span>  <a href="#rule.ranges-specifier" class="smpl">byte-ranges-specifier</a> = <a href="#byte.ranges" class="smpl">bytes-unit</a> "=" <a href="#rule.ranges-specifier" class="smpl">byte-range-set</a>
@@ -1349 +1348 @@
          <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/438">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/438</a>&gt;: "media type registration template issues"
          </li>
+         <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462</a>&gt;: "Editorial suggestions"
+         </li>
          <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/485">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/485</a>&gt;: "MUSTs and other feedback"
+         </li>
+      </ul>
+      <p id="rfc.section.E.4.p.2">Partly resolved issues: </p>
+      <ul>
+         <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462</a>&gt;: "Editorial suggestions"
          </li>
       </ul>

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

@@ -217 +217 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="suffix-byte-range-spec"/>
   <x:anchor-alias value="suffix-length"/>
-   A byte range operation &MAY; specify a single range of bytes, or a set
+   A byte range request can specify a single range of bytes, or a set
    of ranges within a single representation.
 </t>
@@ -1573 +1573 @@
     </t>
     <t>
+      <eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462"/>:
+      "Editorial suggestions"
+    </t>
+    <t>
       <eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/485"/>:
       "MUSTs and other feedback"
@@ -1578 +1582 @@
   </list>
 </t>
+<t>
+  Partly resolved issues:
+  <list style="symbols">
+    <t>
+      <eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/462"/>:
+      "Editorial suggestions"
+    </t>
+  </list>
+</t>
 </section>
 </section>